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First Drop By GridLockDaFelon
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full action spits-n-sprays as i use word-ammunition ta re-insert tha position of how real em-cees should be dissin//
missin tha critical-point i've made whack's re-phrase b4 gettin slayed by tha rapper named Grid arrivin wit devestation in pages// ages of freestylers-n-keystylers have come-n-gone so far i'm tha only one takin steps forward as i rise ta tha top i'm movin on// wrong-doings i b choosin' ta deal out tha blows wit flows tha leave u beat-up n shot-down wit forms of viscious-brusin'// losin' ta me isn't a option on tha menu cuz there no stoppin me from claimin' tha crown at every open-mic revenue i've been to// thru bullets-n-knives i dodge i watch as lives r lost while i remain un-hurt no scar to show for the risin rapper-life cost// holla me n tell me what ya think of this lil ample of mine... peace out.... GridLock |
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IP:
Good try at multies fam, but try and get a topic next time...but elevate and you'll be good. Uppin
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what he said.. plus, you need to shorten your line length a few of them ran on a little bit.. other than that it was pretty good..
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IP:
iight thanx fo ur opinion's yo i will keep droppin stuff so be on tha look out for more posts by me....
peace out... GridLock |
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