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Old 06-03-03, 03:12 PM   #1
GrYm StYlE
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Without a curse this verse is profane,
propane
light the flame
Poetry openly spilled till the match gets scratched
drop bombs on dot-coms
vocal sense that's no-name
incognant, unidentified fatal objects that flow strange
demented ,melenin tinted, ebony heavenly scented individual
critical lyrical relevance is evident
of Jah's benevolence
flow bestowed with intelligence
represent, wreck, and chin check with intellect
I'm nice with the rhythm
slice 'em to ribbons
spittin' bars that scar
my verse is your prison
venom drippin' from canines morphs into rhymes
designed deep inside my enzymes, comin' deadly like the end of times
the legend knower, club promoter
Is the check signed?
if so, then it's wreck time
flow to rip with associates
keep it right not real act
that's how you supposed to spit
it's only appropriate to focus with my vocal gift
the flow is sick
beyond the reach of medicine
live wire conedison
calmin' ya nerves like Ritalin
I better beats with adrenaline and leave MC's past tense
if it's a penny for you thoughts
then I'm making mad sense(cents)
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Old 06-03-03, 03:50 PM   #2
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oh shit this nigga is gettin consistent wit his shit. ill wordplay and bar structure.
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Old 06-03-03, 03:54 PM   #3
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Thanks Deen
Bout time peepz read i mean read my shit
everybody is usually like err wack you suck
with out even reading
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Old 06-03-03, 04:03 PM   #4
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yea, 'cause you got a fucked bar structure.. but the flow was amazing, vocab was skill.. you had no real depth or topic, but it was still like "wow" I really didn't expect it..

"it's only appropriate to focus with my vocal gift
the flow is sick
beyond the reach of medicine
live wire conedison
calmin' ya nerves like Ritalin
I better beats with adrenaline and leave MC's past tense"....

^that was a sick ass flow dawg.. you do got skills, do you do audio.. if you do we should collab..
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Old 06-03-03, 04:12 PM   #5
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You got a lot of skill... the wordplay and multi's are nice. I liked the flow, I ain't see too much wrong with your lines. Nah mean? Keep uppin' though, i'll be checkin' more of your posts.
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Old 06-10-03, 12:09 PM   #6
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