How many emcees must get killed?
Before somebody realizes don’t fuck with trill?

How many emcees do I have to defeat to prove myself,
Spitting 1000 bars in one flow damaging my health,
Everyday I improve my skillz n elevate by 5 percentage,
Let peeps view my battles fo free no charge at the entrance,
Cause the cypher is my arena, and yaw never even seen-a,
Emcee that leave a murda scene cleaner,
But I aint talkin homicide I aint into taking yaw gangsta homo-pride,
Lyrically developed, mo dangerous then powder enclosed in an envelop,
Bring death and chaos worse then the 4 horsemen,
But of-course-then, I must be forcing,
My swinging blades through yo skeleton, rhymes mo fluid then gelatin,
Cats softer then silicon, any emcee try n spit on me? Then I’m billing-em,
Why’s my career not happening maybe because the industry,
Is not interested-in-me, they don’t want the best-in-me,
People only wanna hear me talkin about how I carry a vest-with-me,
When I’m spitting I rip-in another dimension,
It’s like my life reflecting in a reflection,
My appearance seems like all I talk is deception,
Deceiving speech receiving, listeners who are all believing,
Me saying what I say when I’m spitting.

Chorus: (x2)
How many cyphers must we rip?
How many scripts must we flip?
How many of yaw rely-on-trill?
How many actually reply-to-trill?
How many emcees must get killed?
Before somebody realizes don’t fuck with trill?

No matter what I do I’ll still never get my appropriate respect,
No one pays attention to my high level intellect,
N you can’t intercept my telepathic waves with yo intelligence,
What ever you spit against me is totally irrelevant,
I’m never hesitant, to-get-rid-of or assassinate,
Emcees from a distance, like Kennedy presidents,
My verbal hollows ricochet and hit residents,
I still remain prop-less, regardless of my progress,
I’m still in the process, of learning my existence,
My position in this game my purpose,
Stay tighter then copper-wire, prepared to cop-some-fire,
Never live in proper-attire, reject offers-to-retire,
I never heard of an MC being polite, the fuck would I know of a po-fight,
So elevated I take on-flight, on-sight, collapsing emcees like a land-slide,
True lyrical skillz? Now the demand’s-wide, now yo man’s-slight…ly,
Thinking that me getting a deal is impossible,
My existence into this game is un-causable,
Surrounded by Nitrogen so I cant breath gotta flow flawless un-plausible.

Chorus: (x2)

In this game I’m just a molecular sized particle,
Who thinks un-practical, who think mathmateical,
Who ready to crack-yo-skull, who pack-nun-dull,
Who track-the-sun,
To keep flows hot constantly,
Cuse actually, battling-me, is quite deadly,
Rhymes so dangerous my metaphors,
Turn into metal-claws, can no one access my mental-drawers,
And start sending, never-ending, messages that’s worthless,
N I’ll never stop rhyming until my lyrics n vocals r perfect,
I don’t work my way from the bottom I just target,
The hardest, regardless, what’s they status in the market,
Yo rhymes stay beneath my feet like carpet,
My voice regulates in all regions, spread to all religions,
No matter what bread makes all life’s decisions,
Like a doctor making a surgical incision,
Must perform with precision,
My shit dope? To believe that cats still refusing,
They say my rhymes too confusing, yaw just under an illusion,
Under an oath to say my drops are illusive,
First Day Out in the Game is the album my shit neva gunna be labeled exclusive.

Chorus: (x2)
How many cyphers must we rip?
How many scripts must we flip?
How many of yaw rely-on-trill?
How many actually reply-to-trill?
How many emcees wanna get rid of trill?
How many emcees have no need for trill?



there was a couple of mistakes i edited...spellin n shit. and i changed the intro a bit

Not Bad TRill
For You its Ill

This shit WAS ill... I was feelin' the wordplay. Ha, ha. You got mad skills yo, you already know that though. Kept me readin' the whole joint, I was likin' how ya threw in the chorus too, gave it some extra style.

looks like my piece How Many

Hott, i loved it man. The hook was nicely done and the rest of the piece was ill.

Cause the cypher is my arena, and yaw never even seen-a,
Emcee that leave a murda scene cleaner,
^That line was hot I even double read that line. Nice Drop.

Peep My latest drop 7 Days War.

thanks for all the replies........haha there' like 5 mistakes in there
i gota edit that a bit...............................

thanks and i'm a read yo pice 7 days war..................

UPPING

Ay yo Trill wuttup dat was a vicious drop return da favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54496

that was a nyce drip, its kinda sad that kats probably dont undastand that you really mean what you dropped, nice multi's, flow could have been betta, couple of similes, nyce drop though, it should sound dope on audio if you found tha right beat, keep postin, u'll make it, stay real, peace, 1 luv

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It's ai sum good stuff

An altogether nice piece

-peace-

yeah nice drop man,likedhow the chorus repeated itslf twice,would be good on audio,would sound real good on audio actually,withthe righ tbeat an all...teh murda scene line was ill...nicely done,liked th eillusion parts the last four bars at the end,finsihed it nicel,good work dun..


bismillah

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Shit was Ill trill....good wordplay and great flow...no wonda your a mod here lol .... uppin fo ya

lmao, trill, this was hype. but it was a beastie boys song. IT'S THE SAME!

meh, dope wordplay as usual, the chorus was pure beastie boys, but I like the Beastie Boys, so it works out.

good work dude (check out Mental Eclipse)
Peace

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I was definitely feeling the chorus on this, Nice wordplay...uppin this piece

this was nice, it flowed good, and had nice vocab, but you used alot of fillers that didnt really fit in with what you where tring to say...over all it was nice, just elevate so you dont need so much fillers