yo lets go...no crew votin, no dr, 20 lines max...

where u at man.....comon, i wanna get this done by today.

yyyyyyoooooooo.........where u at man? comon...its been a day.....

Lets dance

with all your determination you gone to deep
you've come from the shallow end leading up to me
conveniently, I'm the predator in your step
I'm the top of the food chain in the waters debt
You can't rise to my current I'll pull you in and you'll be drowned
you sent a message in a bottle and its floating its way down
the message contained a hope for a vote but it'll never be found
I'm the thing Intangibling yah, in you see
A tidal wiping out all rappers com'in for me
The beach will be closed and it'll be your fault you lack
In fact why was the beach closed.........? Shark attack

i just made it up in a few seconds for you to stop postin so
hit this back
Out

yo bust this

onli way u the king in water is in ur imagination/
u tryna talk like u the shyt but that aint the situation/
nigga, go hop on ur skateboard and pump avril lavigne/
onli way u get respect is if u battle little kids, not kids like me who is supreme/
ur currents been washed out and ur ocean has been dried/
who eva told u that u could rap, musta fuckin lied/
onli reason u called whitekid is cuz u wanna b black and dont stick to ur roots/
u that type to rock payless kicks and try n rock em like they hot like timbaland boots/
u must be a redneck, u rock a durag to try and get ur shyt nappy/
probaly frolic and wear peace signs to try and make the world happy/
the onli sea u rule is ur bathtub with ur little toys and yellow ducky/
eva wonder y ur lil bro look like me?, asked ur moms bout the time i fucked her and she sucked me/
no rappers come for u, u more known then vanilla afta his hit/
u probaly recycle nursery rhymes and try and spit it like it was ur shyt/
u aint no predetor, man i just ate u for dinner/
tore ur ass up so bad u might as well call me a sinner/
onli way u get ass if from feelin up on ur lil sister/
u suck a lot of dick, then u wonda y ur cheekz full of sores and blisterz


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yo where the votes...we need votes!...i kno ya out there

we need votes...man...votes.......

Tha won this shit with batter wordplay and shit
hey man you should join my crew Corruptionz
what you think hit me back>>>>>>>>>>>
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already got a crew representin I.L.L...wit explicit and mctkilla....sry dog...we need more votes...

You set this thread up wrong

Next time when you click new topic make sure to tick Start a battle

Otherwise the person who wins wont have the battle count on their record

thnks....i never knew that shyt

intangible got this shit. Yo wus up wit a battle homie hit me wit a pm if you down
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i sent u a pm.

yo there is no doubt it Intangible won only, but I had one prob. you feed off his verse no hatin.

onli reason i fed off of it...is cuz i felt i had to use his own shyt, and flip it on him. later thnks for replien