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5 votes wins
no hate votes or d/r's
spit ya shit asap
----------wun-------

you aint no "veteran"(OLD) you some how just seem to "stumble and ran" into me,
i consider you the over rating of over RATED TEXTCEES//
suggesting you make it past E T i stay loud, i married JANE so i stick to yo ass
like cotton mouth//
pull Sikes and "fouls" puttin "penalties" on the court, who would have thought i leave
your "ankles" blown outta "socket" and lookin "SHORT"//
man of course i leave you "huved" and "horsed" while swallowin "GLue", i new a
newbie would replay so i pretended to be new//


style 2

man yo shits generic good will would never wear it, im "TRIX-in" up this rabbit that
cant afford the "carrot"//
five hundred in twelve of my lyrics sparing you bad, shit ill mix you up on the "beach"
and "serve you back to fag"(sex on the beach, the rink of fags)
you spit verses i done had inhauled and spit back, you got my "sloppy seconds" like
"dracula eatin on RAG"//
i look at you and laugh, cause you runnin away from battles, this isnt a fuckin essay
and PAX still aint close to my level//
my spit is just a "shovel" diggin into you deep, you beatin me is like giving yourself
a heeky up on the cheek// it just wont fit.......





ELEVATED~ONE

PLEASE VOTE ON THIS.IT IS GETTING SLEPT ON.IT IS BETWEEN ME AND MY WACK ASS BROTHER.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54587

only time u servin somethin is at a fast food joint
ya lyrics are like a dull pencil,they aint got a good point
u need to hit the exit cuz im fixen to wreck shit
u dont want my heavy-ness on ya shoulder,u can flex it
u gonna have to elevate ya thought to higher levels
the only way u could be 'helll on some1 is if u higher devils
ya front door and ya ford pinto car is the only thing u key-in
imma call u a prewriter cuz a bad verse is all im seein
ya got 2 styles ya 1st one was shit n ya otha 1 was ass
imma need some toilet paper my lyrics is the shit n yours are the past

wun

up it for votes

up it for votes..........

wun
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yo the shit of elevated through was not bad...but too much!
the shit of 512 was also okay....

but at the end i think that elevated had some better punches, so he gets my vote!

peace!

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turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

up it for votes.............peace

wun
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i think 512 got this because he had betta flow. ey 512 can you check out my battle with duce 1 rae and delerious right quick and poll vote for the best verse. i appreciate it

poll vote- 512

I would give it to Elevated if i could vote cuz he puchned harder, he flowed better, he gets my vote if i could vote

Can you vote on mine???
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4752#post514752

I give this to 512 cuz I felt his flow more.....elevated u got some skillz, just try to develop em.......yo hit up my battle vs. Atl Spilla..1

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55425

yo vote on this yalll and i will hit yours up

uppppppppppppppppin


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up it............peace................

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vote - 512

He Took This pretty Easy....... His Come-back was Dope and his punches hit harder than Elevated-thought's...... Also Elevated, don't write too much, it becomes boring.....

Vote- 512