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Old 06-07-03, 01:32 AM   #1
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B.R.E Presents: "Tha World Around Me"

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................................B.R.E............. ............................

Verse 1:
Society’s downfall means construction uprising, killing plants will cause our obstruction to start demising /
Children's eyes intake dead ferocity and narcotic addicts, instead of families ties, generosity, and mathematics /
Militia's stronghold & government reigns the candid gates, of modern man from expanding our brain's-rate /
Forced to abide lies and flawfull laws that strain-grates, while requiems of church are stranded from states /
From the crisis causing trembles and fears"/
Shading an Incredible amount of Tears"/
Everyone Involved slowly Disappears"/
I juss want to get Away from all this Darkness"/
Wish I was Dead , so I wont be able to go Through all this Crisis"/
Falling even deeper into my own personal misery"/
At least on this Earth , I know that theres a Place for Me"/
can't control My fears, my hurt and my agony"/
Askin God to please come home and Rescue me"/
One step to death, cutting deep just to watch my Soldiers Bleed"/
it feels like earth can't get much worse than this ,maybe hell is better"/
How can everything hurt like this , I dont want to Cry Forever"/
Authenticity of biblical artifacts are still sought-after, with every search we unearth the temptors sins and laughter /
See he’s an actor; he’s not our friend for a second, but when one loses focus on the big picture he ends our lesson/
Cults across the globe are in homes where we reside, plotting devastation with patience in return with genocide /
Nobody knows tomorrow yet sorrow leads to suicide, anger overloads in our domes so we serve time for homicide /


Chorus:
A feeling of silence, a feeling of depth...
A feeling of wanting to take away ones breath...
A feeling of hurt, a feeling of pain...
A feeling of never being able to feel the same..

Verse 2:
Every once in a while i Lose Control"/
And Every once in a while my Heart goes Extremely Cold"/
Children thru Seniors, even Doctors to Monsignors, regardless of our gene’s-core will live thru others demeanors /
Scene’s of gore and animosity are commonly painted, while feelings of adore and generosity are solemnly tainted /
Education from K-thru-12 show's students turning, to arcades instead of grades-and-shelves of books for learning /
In this modern century of a dozen gone backwards, were still judged on color, ethnic background and our stature /
Distress breaks thru my chest like a compound fracture, America may never-ever see our own Margaret Thatcher /
What happen to gaining knowledge with desire, we’re too concerned and acknowledged with our name-brand attire /
People perspire and dread sweat yet regret past mistakes, the moves we make affect our outlook, more than a date /
Our futures at stake, tomorrow’s is not guaranteed, yet we concede the apocalypse is something we will-never see /
Inevitably it’s the gifts from god we take for granted, that’s like removing our roots before our seeds were planted /
Yet actors glisten in limelight of utter euphoria, young women go thru 'secret' surgery to be labeled with 'Victoria' /
Is birth simple luck or actions from 'God' or-'Rhea', either way this imagery is clerically not just a phantasmagoria /

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Old 06-07-03, 01:46 AM   #2
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Uppin for this Piece............One of my Best work ever
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Old 06-07-03, 01:49 AM   #3
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Holy Shit....Im totally speechless, Amazing...everything....dawg....WOW I really enjoyed this peice, Legend for open mic maybe....lets see what others thought
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Old 06-07-03, 02:22 AM   #4
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That was great G
I felt what you mean and I think its all true
Maybe you should be a rapper
That was great, I keep readign your stuff
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Old 06-07-03, 03:29 AM   #5
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this is tight fam
i really liked it......amazing work
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Old 06-07-03, 10:36 AM   #6
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WWWHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEE
this was dumb ill,DDDDDDAAMMMMMMMMMMMNN
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Old 06-07-03, 11:57 AM   #7
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Thanks Everyone for da Feedbackkkk....4 sho...I'm just repping for B.R.E............And i Just spit out real shit right here.....No fake shit..........Uppin for more feedback
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Old 06-07-03, 11:59 AM   #8
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your very consious to lies trechory that normal people who conform to basic society wouldnt look into indepthly......that shows a love and passion for what you do and write...this was done without flaw in a sence reminds me of classic rass kass or killahpriest great peace twin
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Old 06-07-03, 01:12 PM   #9
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damn.............................................. ..........
thats all I can say damn.............................................. .............
Uppin on this piece.
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Old 06-07-03, 01:22 PM   #10
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this is what they call "dopeness maximus"
I always see these BRE presents pieces, and they're all good, but not amazing. this was fuckin amazing.
it was kind of an eye opener to what we overlook.
nice work bash
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Old 06-07-03, 02:31 PM   #11
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damn yo.. I was really feelin' this shit.. the flow was dope, vocab was off-tha-hook wit no dial tone... n'a'm'say'n

At least on this Earth , I know that theres a Place for Me"/
can't control My fears, my hurt and my agony"/
Askin God to please come home and Rescue me"/
One step to death, cutting deep just to watch my Soldiers Bleed"/
it feels like earth can't get much worse than this ,maybe hell is better"/
How can everything hurt like this , I dont want to Cry Forever"/


deep... yo, by the way, I ain't want to type it again.. so check your PM's.. lol..
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Old 06-07-03, 05:58 PM   #12
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Uppin for more feedback , and I will return da favour
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Old 06-07-03, 06:32 PM   #13
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everything already been said.....dope bash......dope
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Old 06-07-03, 06:48 PM   #14
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Thanks....Still uppin
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Old 06-07-03, 08:33 PM   #15
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