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No crew, d/r votes

3-0 is a KO, 5 votes is a win

Make it quick dogg

aight QUICK key...~~

Im so off the hook that im mad yo i should be put on speaker fone,
you false, you aint a "dark-force" jus in my "shadow" put there as a weaker clone/
lyrical "visual cologne", you can see the "smell" of defeat in your eyes,
i got the "hands of death" so when i "touch DOWN" you bound to "FALL to your demise"/
flow the facts y hold them back? as your last temptation il leave you "hollering",
come at me like u sweet, i cut off your feet, and im lack-toes intolerant/
spit vicious recitals eat a bible and spit scriptures,
in "full colour" il make you "face" ur "fake" like michael jackson over 18 and then kid pictures/
~u dont make sense il clean the lies out your mouth like my rhymes are "Colgate" dense,
fuck Bruce Willis' kid, you been "killed" so bad seeing your wacknesss is like the "8th sense" (6th sense)

It's hard times cuz he's "born to kill" battles with weak rhymes on "weaker lines" then a "cut up bag of coke"/
like a broke toke from shitty "pot smoke", he's not strong enough to make the lightest bitch "choke"/
My battles hot like "Aniston", but you too busy checkin out "Brad",
I tore you like a "sword" held by "Sinbad", won this war like the "Trojans" in the "Illiad"/
bitch, ur rhymed flowed like a tight asshole wit consitpation,
ya ur name tells it all, even if i was ya dick u couldnt beat me to get an ejaculation/
i can tell by ya post, dick rydin is wut u about,
i didnt even have to come back, ya shit was weak, like jadakiss ya "knocked yaself out"/

good spit dogg.....good luck.....
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aight good quick battle lets get feedback with explained votes okay.............................................. ................................................

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my vote goes to DarkForce cuz al together he had much better punch lines in my opinion and punch lines are my fav so..............yea..............

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wow this was a great battle!
rhymz of u both were okay!
soldier had the better punches so he gets my vote!

peace!

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soldier came wit the better punches and wordplay so in my mind he gets the vote can y'all vote on my battle it is gettin slepped on

aight aight thats love keep it comin
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good battle on da real tho...I think this will be close....u keep on elevatin dogg!!! votes votes votes....we will return the favor!!!

Damn 2003 took this with this line......damn one hell of an opener
:Im so off the hook that im mad yo i should be put on speaker fone,
you false, you aint a "dark-force" jus in my "shadow" put there as a weaker clone/
that was funny yo................. kinda a close battle but this line really TOOK IT...
vote= 03

soo3...ur clone line wast tight as fuk...but overall i think dark's flo and consistant punches took this.....both are better than me so i shouldnt say shit lol...props to both...Vote Dark

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