now people complain i write long shit...so to counter this,i drop a short 5 minute keystyle...lmao keystyle,how very cyber thug....oh well! so i drop a short keystle....



i recall the first time i saw the sun shine something something mumble mumble mumble fuck it...
okay i remeber the first time i saw the sun shine out over the village//
basic blade shop filled warrior grimage holding grudge initiate pillage//
hold up...what?
distorted image rearange the jigsaw back onto my basic eyesore,might or//
war whore creating great interest over massive magical bangle effect//
watch wreckage collate on beach shore wall chain hammer anvil store//
sparkly beige bezerker wage blood red rage jugular paper cut on last page//
gathering giants slaves became dispodent axe handle clubbing broken promises to dust//
swanning out the river to the bust overflow dam control something sober//
i aint even gonna worship the dead that attempt to kill me before half-times over//
hella four leaf clover splash damage effect cannon artillery coordinates intercept//
interject elder discussions,probably ending up looking white chalky something something mumble mumble...
floating in the air catching hot air rises like subway transport,scratch last resort//
shits really like blooming super nova combustion spontaneous,derange picture rearranges//
into moon light reset button splendor friction,ill ask again when i quit stompin on the richter//
something something this cats mumbling something about getting simpler,simpler...




weeee!....there....dont tell me this is long...its 14 bars for fucks sake....oh well,,,i don tlike writing short things,certainly not quick ones but yaknow...boredom...tell me the meanign in your respone si so know youve read it....ahhaha....proofing the shit...

now can we all stop sleeping please...

I ENJOYED IT BUT I ALWAYS DO DAMN THAT 'S DEPRESING AT TIMES WHY DO PEOPLE SLEEP SO MUCH?

^^^ Everyone wants replies in their drops but won't drop one on others...... that's why I always reply to shit worth peepin'

this was good keystyle.......

what's with the mummble mummble shit?

uhhhhh i didn't really understand what it ment so.....

wierd shit....

word

lmfao
this was pure hilarity. I couldn't take it seriously because of the something something mumble mumble mumble...just so fuckin funny.
reminds me of the "they're in for a wholloping folks" line lol.
This had dope vocab and meta and such as usual, very nice atetrack.
Peace

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this was good........and nice to see 8trax keeping yo flows short......lol its true yo othe drops are madd long and i dont wanna read em.....the vocab was good flow could've been better word play was good..........

another 8trx drop..........another good reading...................

UPPING FOR HIM

Im not going sleep on ill posts so im not going sleep on yours.

I liked it even thought it was short, I kinda like the more lenthy ones myself as long as the subject isnt pulled on and out to far. I liked the flow it was easy for me to pick up on and go over in my head. Good Drop, hit me up with future drops.

Now Ate...I read this and multies, vocab was nice, I think you're gonna have to start putting the English translation down the botton haha na kiddin mun...I don't really get the idea behind it either but it looks to have been done really nice...

swanning out the river to the bust overflow dam control something sober//
i aint even gonna worship the dead that attempt to kill me before half-times over//

That was nice....I jsut wanna know what the mumbling things all about mun?? haha

.........Pz..........

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lmfao!...

fuck knows what the mumble shit is,i got no fucking idea lmao...

eh understatement ...its not supposed to be serious,?i think?

haha oh well...


massmeditation type levitaion.

"your all a bunch of ffffuckin assholes"lmao...





into the stratos

Nice wordplay dawg..you had a few tongue twisters in there lol..

but this was gr-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-eat...sorry mumbling lol.

peace
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^^^lmao dun...thats s-s-s-s-s-stuttering





high like hot air pockets

Pretty good, but I think your emphasis on wordplay took away from the story line, you lost me a few times. But, it's possible that I'm just stoned. Props.

....wordplay?...storyline?...
i dont htink is either in there