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Chrit 5 71.43%
Shadow God 2 28.57%
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Old 06-07-03, 09:31 PM   #1
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Chrit (3-0) vs. Shadow God (3-0)

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Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

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Old 06-08-03, 12:22 AM   #2
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Old 06-09-03, 01:19 AM   #3
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Aiight, I'm gonna try a battle verse with diff styles.
Peep..
GL Chrit.

Yo - My verbals so taxin on the throat I leave ya whole thorax-dented - ya voice bended cuz you couldn't be the Main focus in my eyes if you were contact lenses!
shit - It's like you got branded-a-pig' cuz you labeled-a-bore and you gettin fucked with felonies cuz I break-the-in-laws!!
You know I'm like the daddy-of-animal-health cuz I constantly son-vets - ya-done-wrecked and ya missing a page or two cuz I see no-content!
Fuck! Shadow ripz-up-herbs and verses - Inverts-curses and destroys-anthems- ya-verbs and skills couldn't develop quickly if you spat wit-polaroid cameras!
My methods are Torterous and I'll son you to-where-crooks-dwell - cuz Chrit couldn't hold knowledge with a Job-as-a-Bookshelf!
If Chrit got his way the planet-would-be homosexual and he would-if-he-could! you-violently-shook and you Ugly in NY sweatshirts cuz you "Don't look good in the hood*

"Murda..."

Fuck-war-bitch!-I'll-rip-Chrit-Vocal-chords-and-remove what he stands-on to leave-him-floor less -
Cuz-i'm-LAWless wit-no-morals-or-respect -for 'fuckers in line and i'm like who wanna get whored next?
Chrit! -ya bitchslapped-wit-Skilled-rapz-that-rip-back-caps-and-like-FELINE-'Rabies' my-spitz-kill-catz! -
Bitch-ya-shit's-whack-mine-iz-fat so-you-gettin-ripped-bad - cuz my skillz like Dividing hats couse!

"Tha Switch...ain't over yet."

You lay frayed, your verses are straight gay, like ‘midgets punchin your teeth’ I leave you ‘short of speech’, Chrit, you like ‘eight days’ cause you ‘more~than~week’. (said your name…lmao)

Chrit…Spit like a menstrual cycling dyke, your central ideas die as I’m peelin off my glock, you like a kid playin hookie, you claim you ill, but you not. (That’s right, fake mothafucka)

And as for best crew…That means nobody ever tests you, Oh yeah, and your verse, I’ll easily ‘top yours’ even though I didn’t ‘drop first’. (That would mean I was above him…for those who are stupid)

Bitch, You get smashed into two, And broken one at that, cause I got no need to hold knowledge……I drop it when I rap. (Ownage)

Rip through your pavilion casually, I’ll expose you whore, we could go to war, but where I come from, we don’t allow civ~ILLian casualties. (Rawr)

I got ‘concrete punches’, like ‘violent cement’, Throw shots at you, ‘slap you’ like ‘whores hittin erections’, your punches got ‘no shock value’ like ‘poor electricians’.(Yep...that's how you use wordplay)

I’m gonna start smackin ya spine, don’t claim your bars are sick cause like ‘actors on strike’, you don’t want any ‘part in this’. (wordplaying you to school)

I drop sinister quotes, you were hopin I wouldn’t ‘remember to show’, cause know, you’re fucked if I drop, like prisoner’s soap. (can you even comprehend this?)

I should 'leave this board', like 'retired skateboard riders', cause I'm 'too big for the web' like 'overweight spiders'. (that's right...I'm too good for the net)

Soon breathin will be stopped, you got 14 cats in your 'W' column, and you shout out in sin, but 'beatin people off' doesn't 'count as a win'. (damn...you're really good with dick...or so i heard)

You my punching bag, it’s clear you suck now, got a battle with me, and opportunities comin knockin……………………you the fuck out. (wordplay...again, read slowly so you'll understand)

Be real or get vexed, I’m iller and best, you’ll soon die fairy, only way people ‘feelin your text’ is an a blind mans library. (yeah, you little bitch...no ones feelin you)

Your words are wack, spray lines like unserviced gats, Chrit's like a ‘donkey’ at a ‘drive-thru’…I’m quick to ‘serve his ass’. (stay away from my drive thru whore)

Siting the hearse, hit fans, your writings the worst, cripped man, I could ‘talk shit’, but I’d get banned for ‘biting your verse’. (good thing you too wack to bite)

Guns blare when I cock it, way I hits unfair, get off my cock bitch, lips on the chair so you’ll have a reason to talk shit. (that's right, you need a reason)

Merked..?


Mad Man: I uncapitalized and unquoted most of it.

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Old 06-09-03, 11:54 AM   #4
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Aight look

Cat cant beat me legally, forced to cheat... check the edits/
New somethin was up when you wanted me to ghoswrite but declined cause you already indebted/
Shadows profiles right cause after this fight 6 feet deep is where he'll reside/
Falling to unmatchable might, just the sight of a real emcee has shadow ready to hide/
5-8 and somehow you think you have a chance against King Chrit/
Sorry kiddo but with a prewrite and no personals your verse wasnt shit/
Still on the Producs? Finally feel important now that the quality heads bounced/
Man that sucks when Killa Kobra was more highly regarded, and you still look up to froto that now consistently gets trounced/
I thought you'd elevate by now... but I peeped frontlines... you still lose to new kids/
I guess its too late to quit now... Your best bet is to hope for an adult strain of SIDS/
Now, check this... I'll switch styles without skipping a beat/
Personals already killed you so its time for some wordplay to bring the heat/
You have no future in this... peeping my avvy will be the only time you'll CD/
Cats a master of imagery... cause that narcoleptic verse even left me sleepy/
Shadow's punches cant burn me so he put my verse on a disc to try for the same affect/
I'm sorry you're impotent... but this battle will fix things and leave you e-wrecked/
Lonely cat... went to the circus so he could finally tell his friends he saw some camel-toe/
In this game you have no chance of success... Chrit'll leave you like a failed pizza place.. with no-dough/
Hit you with street shit... rob you.. take ya valuables... decapitate you and leave ya neckclace/
Verbally leave your tubes tied up... leave your bitch ass forever flow-less/
Cat musta ate out a male cow the way he's spittin bull-shit/
Shadow got the flu solely on the fact he could finally have some ill-spit/
I think this kids had enough so I'll leave shadow with some advice... and its not open to discussion/
If you're looking for your career to finally blow-up... you best hope for some spontanious human combustion/
 
Old 06-09-03, 05:06 PM   #5
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Time to vote..........

Disregard his little comments and where he quoted punches

Thats against the rules but mad man didnt have time to get rid of all of it......................
 
Old 06-09-03, 06:07 PM   #6
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damn a couple of books for verses....ok


first of id like to say that Shadow your new style doesnt suit you...

Fuck-war-bitch!-I'll-rip-Chrit-Vocal-chords-and-remove what he stands-on to leave-him-floor less -
Cuz-i'm-LAWless wit-no-morals-or-respect -for 'fuckers in line and i'm like who wanna get whored next?
Chrit! -ya bitchslapped-wit-Skilled-rapz-that-rip-back-caps-and-like-FELINE-'Rabies' my-spitz-kill-catz! -
Bitch-ya-shit's-whack-mine-iz-fat so-you-gettin-ripped-bad - cuz my skillz like Dividing hats couse!

^^^^ill

the rest of it was either played or below your usual standards

ok now Chrit....im begging you to stop refering to yourself as "King Chrit"...

Still on the Producs? Finally feel important now that the quality heads bounced/
Man that sucks when Killa Kobra was more highly regarded, and you still look up to froto that now consistently gets trounced/
I thought you'd elevate by now... but I peeped frontlines... you still lose to new kids/
I guess its too late to quit now... Your best bet is to hope for an adult strain of SIDS/
Now, check this... I'll switch styles without skipping a beat/


^^good....hit him with good personals

Shadow's punches cant burn me so he put my verse on a disc to try for the same affect/
I'm sorry you're impotent... but this battle will fix things and leave you e-wrecked/

^^^good

Cat musta ate out a male cow the way he's spittin bull-shit/
Shadow got the flu solely on the fact he could finally have some ill-spit/
I think this kids had enough so I'll leave shadow with some advice... and its not open to discussion/
If you're looking for your career to finally blow-up... you best hope for some spontanious human combustion/

^^^played.

all in all i believe that Chrit won due to the fact that he had more personals....Shadow i think that you were was too general....nice battle

vote=Chrit

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Old 06-09-03, 07:12 PM   #7
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aight.....

1-0
thanks for the explantion on that vote irrelivance.....

keep voting...
4 more then on to a title shot??
hint, hint, mad man

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J/K we'll see how it goes down...lol

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Old 06-09-03, 09:46 PM   #8
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Originally posted by irrelevance
damn a couple of books for verses....ok


first of id like to say that Shadow your new style doesnt suit you...

Fuck-war-bitch!-I'll-rip-Chrit-Vocal-chords-and-remove what he stands-on to leave-him-floor less -
Cuz-i'm-LAWless wit-no-morals-or-respect -for 'fuckers in line and i'm like who wanna get whored next?
Chrit! -ya bitchslapped-wit-Skilled-rapz-that-rip-back-caps-and-like-FELINE-'Rabies' my-spitz-kill-catz! -
Bitch-ya-shit's-whack-mine-iz-fat so-you-gettin-ripped-bad - cuz my skillz like Dividing hats couse!

^^^^ill

the rest of it was either played or below your usual standards

ok now Chrit....im begging you to stop refering to yourself as "King Chrit"...

Still on the Producs? Finally feel important now that the quality heads bounced/
Man that sucks when Killa Kobra was more highly regarded, and you still look up to froto that now consistently gets trounced/
I thought you'd elevate by now... but I peeped frontlines... you still lose to new kids/
I guess its too late to quit now... Your best bet is to hope for an adult strain of SIDS/
Now, check this... I'll switch styles without skipping a beat/


^^good....hit him with good personals

Shadow's punches cant burn me so he put my verse on a disc to try for the same affect/
I'm sorry you're impotent... but this battle will fix things and leave you e-wrecked/

^^^good

Cat musta ate out a male cow the way he's spittin bull-shit/
Shadow got the flu solely on the fact he could finally have some ill-spit/
I think this kids had enough so I'll leave shadow with some advice... and its not open to discussion/
If you're looking for your career to finally blow-up... you best hope for some spontanious human combustion/

^^^played.

all in all i believe that Chrit won due to the fact that he had more personals....Shadow i think that you were was too general....nice battle

vote=Chrit


^^On The Real . could not have said it better myself...

great battle

Vote Chrit
 
Old 06-09-03, 09:48 PM   #9
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ok now the fuckin thing is telling me that i have to post a fuckin explanation , when i jus' did post a fuckin explanation ...

i agreed with 99% of what IRR said so i quoted his shit up!
 
Old 06-09-03, 10:21 PM   #10
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aiight i'm gonna explain without quotin and shit....shadow god....the style switch.....not doing anything for me.....i tried gettin into ur flow....but started to get a headache......it was too forced and honestly i didn't like it......chrit......straight battle...decent wordplay and punches...even though i seen u come sicker than this....but that doesn't really matter now does it.....cuz i think u won this battle.......now i hope this won't cause no hatin or bitchin....cuz i always come real.......and unlike killa kobra ain't no d/r.......there it is.......vote=chrit
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Old 06-09-03, 11:38 PM   #11
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I'ma have to vote on this one in favor of Shadow Gods, he came with way more multies and puches and he didn't have as much filler lines in this battle.
Some of his lines had me lol!

Siting the hearse, hit fans, your writings the worst, cripped man, I could ‘talk shit’, but I’d get banned for ‘biting your verse’

I’m gonna start smackin ya spine, don’t claim your bars are sick cause like ‘actors on strike’, you don’t want any ‘part in this’. (wordplaying you to school)

I drop sinister quotes, you were hopin I wouldn’t ‘remember to show’, cause know, you’re fucked if I drop, like prisoner’s soap.


These are soemof the hotteest lines I've heard in a while...
 
Old 06-09-03, 11:40 PM   #12
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Old 06-10-03, 07:34 AM   #13
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Shadow GOd bite this whole verse word for word
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Old 06-10-03, 10:38 AM   #14
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^^^ post the link then........................



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Old 06-10-03, 11:13 AM   #15
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Yep it's official

Shadow's verse was completely bitten..........
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...=&threadid=5514

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