fuck u fuck dat crew u claim u reppin//
my niggas shoot to kill like a james bond weapon//
i kill for a livin//
dat shows i have no fillin//
shoot i made u look//
u betta run like a crook//
like me or not ima still kill u//
put u outta order like ya name was fubu//
have no love for people they say im greasy//
two holes will have ya inside fillin breasy//
its mm n celf made takin ova da site//
n cant neva find us losing with out putiing up a fight//
all ya is fags n dikes//
sittin there beatin ya meat on ya bike//
16 bars to ya satisfaction//
my bullet slice u in have like fractions//

Sorry wasnt feeling this at all. Im a big fan of the first version and this was just...well it did that piece no justice at all so I didnt like it at all. Sorry Man. Ya also need to make it longer as well as make your lines a tad bit longer as well. Guess thats all.

shut the fuck up you aint killing anybody, i hate you newbies that do this shit.

Whack............Go elevate Newbie.....Whack ass mah fucka

You are not DMX. That was really wack.

^Nas did the first song, if you making tabs to it.

shouldve been called a reremix, or my remix, because there was a remix already out.
and on the fact, that you messed up a good song doesn't fit you well...
i could probably freestyle a reremix up right now and make it way better than this...

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Thats was aiight for a newb.