I'm enamored with every form of violence
My 9's hammer's cocked to let me break the silence
Electrocute you in the tub with an appliance
Whatever the fuck it takes to gain total compliance
Whatever I can make, fuck the fame I want the finance
Your bitches are turnin to putty inside of my hands
Your loyal listeners have been slaughtered by my fans
So now I'll polish you off like empty Mickey's ice cans
Wanna test ? Best to bring a vest, rhymes penetrate your chest
Leave you coughin up blood like after smokin a pound of cess
Your body's straight shattered, no coroner could guess
The murder weapon, perpetrator, or the time of death
Cause I cook you like meth, rook you like chess
press techs into your necks, your whole crew looks perplexed
at the mess they observe at your death's crime scene
but still they cant resist the urge to rewind me
and by the way, don't forget to remind me
woops - I forgot you was dead, so please forgive me kindly
But what I was goin to ask you to do was fuckin die, G!

Not much of the "gangsta" rap image but I thought to reply to this anyway. Well you need to ya voacb some cause its not good at all to rhyme me with me which ya did. It should be longer at least in my eyes and other than that its so-so as far as it goes.

some nice multi in here,specially round hte tech part,but i ain tint o the gangsta shit honestly,never relaly liekd it.wait fo rthe gangst aheads to come by and peep this for ome decent rsponse

Thanks for your thoughts, kids...me and me? Holy shit, I did didn't I?...lol...what a dumbass...
P.S. I checked out your shit, R.x Seven Day War...very nice

wasn;t really feelings this too much, although some parts were pretty good, multis and stuff - good vocab!

if you drink mickeys in a can your not a gangster, its all about the 40's lol

this is weak even for gangster rap, if your going to do gangster rap do it about someting else besides killing people, and how gangster you are, but you did have ok vocab but it did seemed forced, just elevate, if your going to do gangster rap make it creative be orignal, to many people rap about the same shit