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Old 06-10-03, 03:51 AM   #1
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From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see
Losin tha Rush

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These days……it seems……kats have lost tha heart ta Discova-with-a-Mic/
It’s sad to see old emcees……tryin……Strugglin-ta-Write/
Recoverin’-ta-Fight……smaller odds, than Tyson gettin Bludgeoned-in-tha-Night/
Hoverin’-Despite, they have no words to even Mutter-in-sum-Light/
Damn……tha rush has now faded, lyke a pair of Rocawear-Jeans/
I rememba tha days, when peeps would Stop-and-Stair-at-Fiends/
Kats were addicted ta rhymin’, spittin to Unlock-and-Share-their-Dreams/
Now, lyrical geniuses have been blinded, hit……Rocked-with-a-Terrible-Disease/
Emcees now stutterin, willpower……non-existent……Flopped,-it’s-Embarrasin-ta-See/

I guess……things change, and every emcee eventually Loses-tha-Rush/
No agility, much less stability……even when they’re Usin-a-Crutch/
Skills depleted, wordplay decreasin’, much easier to be Movin-tha-Dutch/
Music-can-Touch, Soothin-Lyrics can be Food-for-tha-Spirit, but Solutions-are-Bluffed/
Endless flowin, Illusions-are-Stuck, brain waistin away, inevitably you’re just Cruisin-through-Muck/

Sadness consumes all, Lyrical-Regression causes Spiritual-Depression, emcees constantly prayin for tha Miracle-Infection/
Endless Hysterical-Inspections of both, Brain-and-Mind/
Prayin-for-a-Sign, hopin that one day……Decay-will-Decline/
Searchin endlessly through resources, eager that one Contains-a-Rhyme/
Jumpin from verse to verse, but you must Remain-in-Line/
If your thinkin’ about quittin……Change-your-Mind/ F*** Love, Pain-is-Blind/

Still workin’ on tha hook,
Peace
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Old 06-10-03, 03:53 AM   #2
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yeah shit was nice goos stuff good word play and was feelin the flow hit up my other open mics and tell me what you thinkk ...........................
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Old 06-10-03, 12:15 PM   #3
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i think/your gay cause y u wearin pink/
if u wanna mess wit me bringit on/
oh dont forget take off your bf thong/
gay faggot/u a maggot/you just cant have it/
only place u gettin it is in the ass/
just like when i stabbed u wit dat piece of glass.
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Old 06-10-03, 12:17 PM   #4
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This Has potential
CHange a lil here and there or i dunno maybve when ya get the hook done it'll shine
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Old 06-10-03, 12:38 PM   #5
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nyce lookin, thanx for tha feed back Treach P and Grym Style, no doubt....i'll peep sum of your ish, and Jokester if you wanna battle................i'm ready to destroy ya, lol, kid you will neva reach my level, stay real, peace, 1 luv
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Old 06-10-03, 09:05 PM   #6
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lyft it, peace
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