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Old 06-10-03, 08:16 PM   #1
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These words i call my own

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This song is going to be ill with this beat
read the lyrics
ill try to put the beat up later



I feel the call, not to bare my arms but to hold my words
I bare the charm of thought created from the wings of humming birds
I let loose this profuse style of fighting capability
I surrender to your demands but now you’ll listen willingly
My own thoughts killing me at times when I was lost
I’ve recreated pain Now I hold it to a pause
A lost cause or just a empty canvas waiting
I take the world inside my head and let it do the painting
After 19 years of training answers seem to come and go
The winds of time will change to hold the structure to the flow
But down below, we can hide from weathers hold
And fuse amongst ourselves where we break free from the mold
Now I cant be told that what is right is never wrong
The rules of life have changed in the words of simple song
And as the day is long so will be the dreams i share
I dare the god up there to listen to my silent prayer
I break free from tempting snares that grope and grab with every step
Ill stand to face the music speaking truth until my throat is strep

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Old 06-10-03, 08:56 PM   #2
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whatever man

u proved you can flow good for you, since i wanna put the silly nonsensical beef behind... str8 drop

multies cuolda been upd.. kinda disapoited set up the end of the bar..

but still tight shit
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Old 06-10-03, 09:03 PM   #3
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^ pretty much what he said. Str8 drop.
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Old 06-10-03, 10:22 PM   #4
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whatever man

u proved you can flow good for you, since i wanna put the silly nonsensical beef behind... str8 drop

multies cuolda been upd.. kinda disapoited set up the end of the bar..

but still tight shit




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Old 06-10-03, 10:23 PM   #5
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that is only like half of the first verse
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Old 06-10-03, 10:27 PM   #6
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what everyone else said..................
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Old 06-11-03, 04:05 AM   #7
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wtf how about we get some real feelings
none of this he said she said
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Old 06-11-03, 04:47 AM   #8
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okay. not good not bad..
average....
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Old 06-11-03, 05:40 AM   #9
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well since its still young what should i do to it?
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Old 06-11-03, 08:33 AM   #10
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Sorry but I didnt really like it........................
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Old 06-11-03, 04:08 PM   #11
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hmmmm
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Old 06-11-03, 06:10 PM   #12
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dog, multies,.. it just aint the style i personalyy like

but to some one who knows music and lyrics id say that the the problem is the set up to the end of a bar

its like, u expect sumthin and thas the standard, but then its wacker then the werd u expected, unepected werds... whie u go for that uh.. new, pop up no-one-gunna-be-ready-for-=this flavor.. i was just let down by the end
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Old 06-11-03, 07:58 PM   #13
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its not really the end its more of the midle
i need to finish it then u will see what i mean
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