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Old 06-12-03, 08:09 PM   #1
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hmm...

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vocabulary is a must to get a rhymithic flux when delivering flows//
or throwin blows like tyson,sting like a bee,jabbin kids like lightning//
i be the enticing pirate stiffling your train of thought,comatosed//
the state i put you in when i induse my venomous vapor//
break the skin with schraded blends strainin kids like oj so you can concentrate when i dominate//
all eyes on me like tupac cuz i do pop with intrusive thoughts//
make you lose ya jaw when i rock shows i rock foes,with jaw blows//
lockdown the dog pound,cuz i be the dog catcher to keep cats safe//
i eat gat spray,then upchuck ya ammunition and start spittin shrapnel//
its obvious you need to invest in a kevlar vest before i disember ya chest//
from within ya ribcage i split vanes with switchblades to stop ya vitals//
the main cannibal eatin kids at recitals when my rhymes is emulated//
i stay violatin like busta bust, bustin guts with 1 pound bats//
let the ground meet ya back up close and personal,make ya spine jump out ya back//
so relax when im in your area,sick like malaria devourin kids from within//
im airborne when i get ground clearance to pound clerics with jagged mirrors//
so you can reflect from within,so catch a glance and get smashed by the vigilante//
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Old 06-12-03, 08:20 PM   #2
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word.some nice vocabs in there,got better as u went on, some lines had nice wordplay,and you had alot of multis,good job do ur thing dun.1
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Old 06-12-03, 09:40 PM   #3
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appreciate that. listenin to busta with a tribe called quest on that track called scenario gets me in the mood.
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Old 06-13-03, 08:08 PM   #4
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whassuuuuuuup^^^
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Old 06-13-03, 11:40 PM   #5
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its good same as sincere said ur vocab wus good
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Old 06-14-03, 12:51 AM   #6
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word uppin.
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Old 06-14-03, 10:23 PM   #7
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up.
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Old 06-15-03, 01:46 AM   #8
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Not bad dawg..elevate
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