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Old 06-13-03, 05:30 PM   #1
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multi practice

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Its Nate M. Hicok ready to go to hell,
But first I gotta explode some shells,
I had guns in pre-school got expelled cuzza show and tell,
Snitch given kites like pussy from a easy whore,
That gat get information up out you like a weegi board,
Got crazy drugs that y'all aint seen before,
Always followed by the Rock like Chris from CB4,
I fly to shows they cant slow my arrival,
Nate The Great I know my title,
Keepem closer than my friends I know my rivals,
Move two birds at once like the gangsta version of Noah from the bible,
Y'all are bums and ya cant outpower me,
The only time you spit alot is when you chew bubblegum or sunflower seeds,
Shoot 3 clips you still missin me,
Ima mystery,
You'll be history,
Because I dont give A damn (Adam) like Sandler from Mr.Deeds
Fake emcees dyin to get they wrist to freeze,
Puttin they're chain in a cooler thats minus 6 degrees,
For 6 seconds shit respect this and for once forget the cheese,
Or your life gon' be cut short like lil kids capris...........


holla at me
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Old 06-13-03, 07:04 PM   #2
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not very good multis... at all, need pratice
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Old 06-13-03, 07:05 PM   #3
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^^^word.....drop that gangsta shit
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Old 06-13-03, 07:38 PM   #4
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i dont know bout multi's not many to work with ... but you started off well and halfway through kinda fell off flow and creative rhymes... keep at it .. 1
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Old 06-13-03, 08:09 PM   #5
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Originally posted by AC-Satch
not very good multis... at all, need pratice


nuff said. theres always room to elevate.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5418#post535418
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Old 06-14-03, 10:33 AM   #6
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No multis? What the hell are y'all readin almost every end of each line rhyes sylable fo sylable....
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Old 06-14-03, 04:57 PM   #7
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work needed
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