Raise your swords. Engage in arms-bearing mechanics. Hate’s discourse, Trained Marionettes sway with each hand twist/
Working tendencies combined three-toed sloth energy, gaze as the grains slip, disturbed twisted hour glass sand pit/
Disillusionment, locale where the razor met the man’s wrist. Hammock man, conceiving the sun-seizing game plan/
Have you ever seen the Sun and Moon kiss? Have you seen the Moon’s lips blistered?/ He always borrows ChapStick from Atlas and you wonder why “I love you” has never been whispered?/
Have you ever seen deceitful pictures? Heaps of wishes, Truth entrapped sack of lies./ Father Time combined bottled wine caper nights, Hatred strikes Mother Nature’s blackened eyes/
Have you ever seen God laugh and cry, bumble out of his hallowed reality?/
Drunken pleasure, wingspan stupor, disgruntled mankind sunken treasure. Mumbling Majesty, stumble with a dream and a sun full of alcohol swallowed grain casualties/
Maybe I’ll wait until the day the Sun and Moon become more social and as they are on top of each other, a diamond ring is presented for the proposal/
Maybe I’ll wait until the day Mother Nature decides to fight back, triple six darkness garden of carnage distraction, so I may obtain the key to find where the Light’s at/
Maybe I’ll wait until the day God thinks he rules the world, so I’ll enjoy it giving him a reality check followed with divine disappointment/
Make Him a laughing stock, post-guerrilla jungle sunshine tactics executed for play. Carpe Diem achievement until I look back upon the week I missed trying to seize this day/

I'll revise it and lengthen it later on when I get around to it. Just seeing how everyone likes it so far.

Great vocab ...hard to understand what you were talkin about but it was good..overall...maybe I'm stupid?? lol

this was a lil confusing but dope overall

thanks for the replies.......

like I said, I'll tidy it up later

*kisses muthuggas feet" although a bit jumbled this is yo crowning moment. dope vocab and interesting thinking points

*hands Muthugga an Eborted rating of A*

plz return http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1008#post541008

Alright I will check it out in a few minutes