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View Poll Results: how tight is this drop?
worst ever 0 0%
terrible 0 0%
sucks 0 0%
its not too good 0 0%
average 0 0%
its good 0 0%
better then average 0 0%
im impressed 0 0%
tight shyt 1 100.00%
the deepest drop ever 0 0%
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Old 06-16-03, 11:45 AM   #1
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ima make a statement; to make, ya gotta keep trudging//
you cant attack the man-made of granite//
...the nigga aint budgin'//
cuz he been through brick walls//
he's taking a walk in every mans shoe//
ya cant tell him he aint "been through it all"//
he's prolly been in your's too!//
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dont test this man, when he confrontin' u//
stay strong, stand tall//
but have a sense of whats right and what wrong//
so this kid on tha block didnt know what to stand for//
he had a planned war//
neither would back down, packed wit more shells that you CAN pour//
cuz this cat at the corner store, was lookin for beef//
the retaliatin boi laughin' with disbelief//
mocked the boi, ignorin' tha gun in his hand//
"man, what is your plan?"//
with no time for an answer, he pulled out his stinger//
"dont ever confront me,...ya could hear the <POP><POP> wit the pull of his finger//"
so now when i look back at it, now that the shyts done//
it dont matter how hard YOU are...
me an my boi are never the victim//

holla bak and lemme know what u think, this is my first drop in open mic and i wanna know what it is on a scale of 1-10

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Old 06-16-03, 04:18 PM   #2
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need alot of work

get elevated dawg
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Old 06-16-03, 04:20 PM   #3
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wasnt feelin this at all man
elevate and you will see the light!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-16-03, 09:27 PM   #4
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hey more replies pleaz
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Old 06-17-03, 04:52 PM   #5
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hey, more replies pleaz
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Old 06-18-03, 12:43 AM   #6
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....uppin
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Old 06-18-03, 04:24 PM   #7
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c'mon, someone reply ....
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Old 06-18-03, 04:27 PM   #8
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i thought this drop was aiight actually, just add some word play to this.............................................. ................one
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Old 06-19-03, 12:06 AM   #9
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aiight thanx for the advice...any more?
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Old 06-19-03, 04:49 AM   #10
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i thought this drop was aiight actually, just add some word play to this.............................................. ................one


yea thats what i was thinkin...............

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Old 06-19-03, 06:35 AM   #11
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Old 06-19-03, 06:44 PM   #12
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aiight....more?
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