Place thoughts to ya temple like pistols at close range//
Ignite my mind flame into ya mindframe to expose pain//
Memories of lost ones review, I preview ya brain into//
Constricting ya lame venues, convulsions continue//
As your mentality is saturated into puddles of tissue//
Heartbeats flutter as I contend to, get in you//
Make slip knots from broken limbs which I use to lynch you//
My hardware consists of ginsu to rip arties into miniscule//
Your miscue was stepping into my art with pen tools//
Fate is reversed into INfamy's curse, I disperse bars//
Which revert stars into comets to fall into the earth, hold up let me alert GOD//
Organs accend as all life-form hence to the beginning of end//
Perfect symmetry begins as revolution appends to a grim sequence of events//
GOD falls into a trance in which I advance//
To plant my hands upon the land to demolish in every chance//
A heavy breath in-takes the oxygen from men//
Civilation faces death in a glimpse, My abomination is sinned//
Global Domination vents through my pores, My dominion of gore//
Abhorred to surviving civilians after I've desinagrated millions//
My foot presses against the crescent to begin a bloody pilgrimage//
Villages subdued by lethal filliments//
While angels of darkness pillage with militance//
Scattered ligiments and battered and rigid timberlands//
I quest for revenge with pain from back-stabbing friends//
Murky depths of Abyss create continent sized cysts//
I slam my fists in rivers, to drench the soil with dead fish//
Diseases reduced to mist, though breathing no longer exists//
The homage of skin, opens gorges for illness to leak within//
The burning of flesh melted by cinders shifts into a deadly winter//

To be Continued...

yo that was pretty dope..lol was alot of some violent shit but pretty good i liked these lines

Scattered ligiments and battered and rigid timberlands//
I quest for revenge with pain from back-stabbing friends//

dope shit.

return tha favor

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PEACE

this was a dope piece, i was felling the flow and vocab all the way through!

"Fate is reversed into INfamy's curse, I disperse bars//
Which revert stars into comets to fall into the earth, hold up let me alert GOD//" - i thought these 2 lines were hott, the stars and comets bit was tight!

keep droppin them liek this dawg, i'l be peepin' PT.2 mos def!

Thanks Dudes
10ne
Some comments finally
Usually i get hate but thanks

shit waas tight im waiting on second verse

This was the hottest bar to me
Place thoughts to ya temple like pistols at close range//
Ignite my mind flame into ya mindframe to expose pain//
Memories of lost ones review, I preview ya brain into//
Constricting ya lame venues, convulsions continue//
As your mentality is saturated into puddles of tissue//
Heartbeats flutter as I contend to, get in you//

GOD falls into a trance in which I advance//
To plant my hands upon the land to demolish in every chance//
A heavy breath in-takes the oxygen from men//
Civilation faces death in a glimpse, My abomination is sinned

Lots of respect here man. This was hot. You have elevated alot.

Word Bmack I been tryin to do all sorts of shit
I dont really rely on any one Style

that was very good, impressive, good wording.

Uppn
10ne

fuckin trippy but mad shit

flows n shit and packs heat ey, shit got meaning and point