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Old 06-16-03, 12:34 PM   #1
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(my last thoughts as i face death)

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i was left ''isolated'' on this earths surface alone//
drug up ''sedated'', must overwhelming the smell of my cologne//
death is ''waited'' hoping im ''reincarnated'' into a clone//
''petrified'' my body feels like its turning into stone//
''electrified'' my senses, my organs, and nerves gone//
i tried but im not going to make it on my own//
so im giving the universe my last ''farewell''//
reading a bible verse before i hit ''hell'' or the golden ''stairwell''//
seems i was "destined" to ''fail''//
instead of slowing down and "restin" i "exceled"//
a stupid ''ruthless'' reject who followed the majority//
left niggas "toothless"no respect for authority//
used excuses like im poor cause im a minority//
i realize life is "strange" and start crying//
in life and death no fair "exchange"no exemplifying//
didnt want a '"change"until i felt i was dieing//
MY body is "burning", im waiting to take my last breath//
in life never stop "learning" cause your knowlede is all you got left//
my thoughts are "turning" this is it my last thoughts as i face death//
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Old 06-16-03, 12:37 PM   #2
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This was dope Bu shoulda used Drugged Up it sounds betta
But this was still Good

Fav. Part was this
used excuses like im poor cause im a minority//
i realize life is "strange" and start crying//
in life and death no fair "exchange"no exemplifying//
didnt want a '"change"until i felt i was dieing//
MY body is "burning", im waiting to take my last breath//
in life never stop "learning" cause your knowlede is all you got left//
my thoughts are "turning" this is it my last thoughts as i face death//
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Old 06-16-03, 12:42 PM   #3
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i did meant to put drugged up my bad thanks
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Old 06-16-03, 01:28 PM   #4
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Nice flow dreamer..keep em comin...it had consistence..I liked it
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Old 06-16-03, 02:05 PM   #5
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nice nice tight

keep it comin
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