here's how i start ma "construction", its a very basic "function"//
i think about "destruction", givin other emcees an "induction"//
in "rap", i think its better then a "slap" if their "crap"//
i dont wanna be a "hater", or a "budia-a-terminater"//
"discriminater",,,, against "race" or "coluer", or even ya "mother"//
to me rap is about "exspressin", not startin "messin"//
ma "messin"-ger is already "sent", im hell "bent"//
on changin peoples "perceptions", not "elections"//
leave that to the "government", their lovin it//
controel aint nothin wid out power, soon their stuck in a "struggle"//
gettin their head up in a "cuffudle", all lifes a "muddle"//
they relise they got "power", but thats about as strong as a "flower"//
they aint got no controel,,,, over the people, we got our own minds//
we aint gunna live da life a "grim",,, or worse bad-ass "crime"//
ma fello niggaz n whiggaz its time,,,, to stand and be counted//
flaunt our quality in their faces,, all races,,,,, join together//
we dont need to be clever, just united, as one,, i think the fun begun//
ima start as i mean to go on,, put away ma gun,, leave it their//
ima start livin life as an equal,, all is fair//
no more war n "deceatin",, i wanna see all ppl "eatin" the same//
all ma people reachin the same level,,, of fame,, in the rap game//
life's been a shame for to long,, time to join and be strong//
its not to late,,, this is human bein's fate, its a trait,,//
in each n all of us,,, so lets start causin a fuss, make our say heard//
to the government,,,, no more "veriations" n "discriminations"//
we all come from the same nation,,,, earth the place of our birth//
place of laughter n mirth for all, not just a few//
no man should be made to take a pew,, not even for a few//
a humans greatest abilty is communication,, thats why we are above//
the rest,,, by far not the best,,,, on the planet,,,we only animals//
not canibals,,, thats how we act,, always whantin his wife//
takin that strangers life wid a blade of a knife//
stop n think,, their is a bigger purpose then this to life//
reproduction is the name of humans gain n fame//
to survive n regenerate our seeds,, not to carry out dirty deeds//
so im sayin it load n proud,, im snappin these puppet strings//
changin ma perception on things,, luvin all life like it was ma mummer//
only thunder i wanna hear is of "lyrics", not "hystirics",,, of raped "wimin"//
so join with me man n start "over",, let life start to flow before its,,,,, "over"//

pze out brothers of all races n religion............

This was well balanced and had a good flow to it man...I liked how you use every line as a sort of statement...bangin..its like your fightin your lyrics

yeah i got the same impression, for a rookie like me this that shit i wanna try n do

thanks fam n chut uppin here

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This was A good Peice
Pretty much all of it was bangin
8.5/10

Liked it alot would go for 8.5 outta ten too dawg,nice work enjoyed it.

Peace

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tight shit fam keep spittin.........

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zainy this amazes me good flow can imagine a beat to it its nice good work

good peice man...
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nice thought into it...............-1-

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