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Old 06-18-03, 01:04 PM   #1
Dark Lord Nykon
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From: From Your BackYard Bitch
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I slit throats with thin strokes
I twist hope
make kid's choke on big ropes
I'm sick, dope..exert energy like twin Cokes being shaken and having their tin broke...
your casket calls
you're fortified with plastic walls
I've outlasted all
12 times more toxic than a dozen of acid balls
make you fuckin bastards fall
pop you like massive claws grabbing a basketball
it's crazy.....how I like splitting atoms just by staring at 'em
I'm unfair like God making Eve bleedonce a month, but sparing Adam
I'm smacking Misters and scaring Madams
I'm tearing blaring cannons
time traveled and stole your parents talent...




The sparing Adam Line
we take our own share from the Hunnies
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Old 06-18-03, 01:06 PM   #2
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liked it,flowed well.

Peace
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Old 06-18-03, 01:14 PM   #3
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it was an aight peace, the flow was good but you need more levation in it.
peep mines called The Skitzo:me vs. me
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Old 06-18-03, 01:19 PM   #4
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yea dog, elevation is the key

it flowed well, the splittin atoms line was good, the rest could have been better

make ur lines even, at leest 13 sylables per line, perfect line is 13-16
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Old 06-18-03, 01:22 PM   #5
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yo i was feeling the creativity though a different style of flowing
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Old 06-18-03, 01:23 PM   #6
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Need to change Hip Hop
peep dis
multifarious complex ascap prototypes;
priceless copywrites arrayed like dolomites.
solidified with slave ship packed molecules;
neurocells needed like h2o supermodel fuel.
bullseye target practice at the synapse.
robin hood accuracy with no relapse.
*subliminal message: i don't give a fuck if you don't understand this*
taps eulogy every so often,
for weak thoughts in coffins.
virtual woodgrain finish in this matrix,
churned by the nanometallic generatrix...
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