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Old 06-19-03, 11:58 AM   #1
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to die for

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mama said if you aint got nothing to live for to find something to die for............................................... ...........................................

ill die over my pride//never gone be disrespected// proad got nothing to hide//my whole life i've invested//ready to die for these streets//my gun has 10 wins and no defeats//i stand strong no retreats//ready for war no hesitation//pull out the 44 no exaggeration//always ready for more until my expiration//death is my destiny//my sins gone get the best of me//even when i die i wont sleep restfully//ill be haunted by demons they gone mess with me//my grandmother said my sins would come back ten fold// so every time i sin i remember what i been told//wont live to get old//but it doesnt bother me//cause i was born and will die in poverty//aint gone be nobodys father cause my father didnt father me//so i have nothing to live for nothing to lose//dont judge me until you walk in my shoes//if this was your life what side would you choose//the left or the right//death or to fight//

You niggas better start living for something or be ready to die for it.
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Old 06-19-03, 12:00 PM   #2
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the award goes to dreamer for being..........
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Old 06-19-03, 12:04 PM   #3
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^^^lol you mean

this was ok...jus keep writin n elevatin
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Old 06-19-03, 12:27 PM   #4
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mama said if you aint got nothing to live for to find something to die for - 2pac


don't display your bars like that, use a new line, it makes it alot easier to read!

keep elevatin, make your bars a bit longer, use multi's, and more complex vocab...
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Old 06-19-03, 12:32 PM   #5
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this needs sum improv. nut it wasnt too bad
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Old 06-19-03, 02:33 PM   #6
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Lay off the gun bullshit. its played out and extremely boring to read. sorry, but its true. you should up your vocab, and display each bar in new lines. have you ever even touched a gun before?
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Old 06-19-03, 03:42 PM   #7
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This kid ask a dum ass question like that he must be from Canada
nigga its grimy in the states its either kill or be kill what yo faggot ass gone do if a nigga run upon you you gone get clapped
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Old 06-19-03, 03:50 PM   #8
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keep elivating dawg...it was o.k...but you talked bout guns too much

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