my verse in a an audio that im gonna be doing with n-demik in a little while, their will be a whole skit leading up to this verse. this is the art of the multi.


i'm kicking it with a japanese flavour, you can rap with me later/
but for now just sit and listen kid, i'm basically greater/
heads ring like these pagers, the lyrical navigator/
a whole squad of escapaders, who're gonna have to waste ya/
we gotta break ya down first before we build you up/
then you can take a round verses every one of us/
like neo in matrix against smith, thats split personality/
i hate tricks, they get dissed and ripped worse than tragically/
no time for kung foolery, i'm fresh like this is new to me/
see, you who sees, might think my style is fucking lunacy/
original to say the least with aboriginal sounding beats/
that echo in ya brain like a neck blow, beef/
is nessessary, blessed? i'm very, threats dont scare me/
i heard it all before, break walls, i'm raw, dont dare me/
to prove my dominance in this providence, its common sense/
the last who stepped? we aint heard from him since/
in fact lets lay back, open a bottle of sa-ke/
ask miyagi, theres no-one on my radar coming at me/
any questions? dont test one with or without a vest on/
my stock is on lock so better invest son/
in closing, hope your motors running now you been taught/
the motion, dont go gunning even as a last resort/
you can always evolve to dopness, defeat those who insult-thee/
make your opponets resolve hopeless with the art of the multi/


feedback?

your flow was jumpy meaning it lost pitch and had low wordplay and small punchlines. However you had a few good lines like
"no time for kung foolery, i'm fresh like this is new to me".

My suggestion is to focus on 1 topic at a time because your flow is very wavy.

This had its up mostly downs
Keep at it and you will reach what you are searching FOR!!!

yeah this was full of multis. i liked it.

it had a nice flow to it.. and i just pictured in my head, this in an english accent.. which made this drop even iller.

would make a lovely audio joint. peace.

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they werent really true multis.. the sounds were too far apart..

"deamons screeming under leagues-a green steamin' sea.//"

^ that's true multis..1=multi sound 2=other sound.. 1-1-2-1-1-1.//....

yours were more like this..
i'm kicking it with a japanese flavour, you can rap with me later/
but for now just sit and listen kid, i'm basically greater/

^see how the sounds are way more spread out in yours, you went half of the second line without even using the multi sound...
2-1, 2-1.//
2-2, 1.//...

just thought I'd share that with you.. I thought it was a good piece, I liked the flow and everything.. wordplay was on, your style, and you did keep to the topic, 'cause the "multis" you were using were pretty consistant...

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NOT MANY MULTIES BUT THE SPIT WAS TIGHT THO

This Was A Nice Drop..Keep Droppin HOtt Shit

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This is a dope sig.

there were shitloads of multi's, and theres no fixed pattern to do them in man. smokin dro, you fucking moron. half of this in the the pronounciation, but surely most people can tell which could sound like multis and which could not.

the whole point of this piece was to show how to do them.

Technically...Thats Not True Multis At All...A Multi Is 2+ Words The Same... Multis Can't Be Counted On A Single Word Syllable Count Basis..They Were More Of Single Word Internals If You Can Call 'Em That

Real Multi's Bolded

Shes a classic, perhaps crafted in magic,
Her last match in the patern thats grasps patching in manners.

Paraded a tainted mixture, erasing a jaded stickler,
Taming a pain of bitter relationships made me wither.

Anyway...Me And Johnny Are Gonna Rip Up This Audio...

*still doesnt understand completly wot multis are*

this was a pretty nice drop. to me, the flow was kinda off but thats cause i was just readin it. and mrb....multies are multi syllable rhymes

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yeh but wtf are they?
rhymes which have different syabelles rhyming in the same line?