sKiLLs




MY SKILLS LIKE RIDE THRILLS BRING CHILLS WHICH REVOLVE AS WINDMILLS/
STRAPED IN A STRAIGHT JACKET AND HOG TIED CUZ BARZ I SPILL BE ILL HAVING A TENDACY TO KILL/
IM LIKE THIRTY BELOW IM SO COLD, MOTHER FUCKERS FROZEN IN TIME WHEN I FLOW/
MOTHERFUCKERS STUTTER THERE JAW AND I KNOW, IM THE MOTHEFUCKING SHIT WHEN I RIP AND I SHOW EM/
ELUDING THE COPS THEY BE TRYING TO APPREHEND ME/
RECIEVING THE HATE FINGER AND HAVING ME TELLING THEM COME AND GET ME/
THEY SWEAT ME, IM DEADLY FAR FROM BEING FRIENDLY I CREATE MORE RHYMES THAT THERE IS LEGS ON CENTIPEDS/
NEVER FORGIVE THEM APOLOGIES, RESORTING TO JEALOUSY AS A REMEDY , TO WHOM BE HEAVILY HEATED WITH ARTILLY, NEVER HESITATE TO DECAPATED YOUR BODY PARTS WITH CRITICAL ACTIVITY

CHECK MY SHIT OUT AND LET ME KNOW WHAT THE DEAL IS .
TIGHT OR NEEDS IMPROVEMENT LET ME KNOW
sHARKie

Jus a played out style
need to up on the vocab and wordplay
also structure ya stuff a lil better to
This was weak

don think it was weak like dark lord said..


but it can use work


it flows alright but its too short and played

WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT IT NOW HAS IT IMPROVED LET ME KNOW WHAT THE DEAL IS. IF IT NEEDS WORKS I UP FOR TAKING IN ADVICE IN NOT WERE THE SUPPORT