iigh...

*8-15 Linez
*No Crew, Hate Or D/R Votes
*Due: 1 Hour Afta Check In

check in...
i'll spit inna few...
PEACE

chekin....in.....
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My Verse:

I'm happy u nd vendetta are togetha - tha 2 bitches unite…
2 'elements' in site, formin 1 but still on't 'shine bright'… (Light/shine - an element)
Ur-a-jet-but-yet, u on't exhibit any kind of 'height'…

It's a proven fact that carson deff can't 'stand alone'…
Takes his wack ass from crew-ta-crew, nex'll be Kapone's… (Tha Regime)
'Roams tha grimy style' but where wuz he 'shown?',
prolly got it from me…thinkin 'repeat afta tone'… (Biter)

ONSLAUGHT

Yo, Like a man wit *NO ARMS* u *THROWING A PUNCHLINE* is Impossible/
You could have a *TEACHER* near-by and still couldnt spit LOGICAL/
if ya Fist was stuffed in a *NAPSACK* u still couldnt *PACK-A-PUNCH* wroth throwing/
you could *FREESTYLE* on the *FLAMING SEA* and still wouldnt be *FIRE FLOWING/
Your INTENSIONZ is *SWEETER* than the *CAVITIES* on ya LERICKS/
Ya name is now *GHOSTLY*, ya ryhmes nobody feel it like *PUNCHES* from a *SPIRIT*/
Ya User speaks for its self u Garbage, and im taking full attack on my target/
ya lyrics couldnt *EXPLODE* or cause damage if the U.S government *BOMBED IT*/
Regardless, of what others say this battle is Clearly MINES im just finishing what u started/
Wit ya *INSIDES* on *SUBZERO* is the only way youll come close to spitting *COLD HEARTED*/

iigh...my verse
waitin on u carson...
PEACE

street legend 8-15
1 hour? lol....

man i read sigs an status an all i be seeing be hypok-kracy//
legend of street, at age 14, an ya cant even serve a loss-ta-me//
u's a de-featable tendency, status quota set low, like ur server.. u low-latency//
quite blatent to me, beat me?, mus be craz-y, if i was a shoe u couldnt even lace-me//
Murdered, but i aint dumb, dun leave gloves in a bronc's trunk fo them to trace-me//
8-15 in one hour? dawg...for-real-i rap on u so hastley, u gotta run son,ta sell ur perfume junk at macy's//

street..member me an u.. used ta be in same-crew, but da otha's show'd ya no respect//
granted u a kid, but u seen my verse be ill, by now u oughta filled da concept//
ship wrecked, sinkin inta unknown waters bellowed by deep blue darkness of dis crypt i keep//
dun cry an weep, ur lines...pulled outta slum-filled trash ally heeps, pre-writtin by fagatistacal kreeps//

u's cheap, unwanted, Public branded version of lucky charms//
come to a fight wit CJ, i destroy u wit 2 banded arms//
nucliec structure's too deep fo da intalectuality of a pre-teen mature-ality//
nigga face it diss loss u feel but nada but supreme reality//
claimin otha-wise be a sin ta god em-self, mark 102 creatin words to disgrace a race by fallacy//

iigh...some votes

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aight both verse were fuckin tight i gotta give it to both of ya, but SL caught my eye and was a little more amusing to me so he gets my vote

VOTE~StreeTLegend

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carson talked big but came small.. your verse had no punches both had stretched lines but Street was better. his punches were more personal and harder than carsons were by far. my vte goes to street

street hit that shit up, he had a better flo better punches and good wordplay, my vote goes to street, nice shit

Vote - street legend

He had harder punches and better meta's to finish off carson....

I felt carson came with some pretty simple stuff but he didnt have that much of hard punches....

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2-0 me..
keep em commin..

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BOTH VERSES WERE GOOD BUT I MOSTLY FELT STREET LEGEND'S PERSONALS & PUNCHES EVEN THOUGH CARSON WAS A LITTLE MORE COMPLEX
VOTE=STREET


CAN YOU HIT THIS?
VOTE LINK: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=59994

i'm goin wit tha street legend here.
his punches were harder and more personal than carsons.
And his flow was hotter.
But carson had sum vocab.

vote=street legend

come check this shit out it's gettin slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58602

iigh..4-0 me...
1 more vote y'all..
good battle carson

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^^^^^
Easily debated who won i gotta agree with everyone bout street punchin harder, carson comin a lil weak. Vote------------> Street
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i take it u can't poll vote...

1 more vote...



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