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Topic...
Right before your eyes

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Checkin in

Checkin In..

Un-Skrypted, I Will Be Dropping My Verse Today..

America, The Beautiful
I Saw America Rise And Never Fall..
Stood Our Ground, Not To Be Enthralled..
I Saw The Washington Sniper and His Son..
Brought To Justice, They Were Outdone..
I Saw The Oklahoma Bomber Put In Jail..
In U.S.A, Justice Will Always Prevail..
Then When Terrorism Rose, Did Not Worry..
We Knew Our Retaliation, In A Hurry..

Pride
I Saw The Pride Of Thousands ..Hero's..
Fighting The War At Ground Zero..
I Saw Allied Forces Rise, Kept Up Fight..
Fought Night And Day, No Need For Light..
Soldiers Killed, Both Sides Of The War..
All Of The Warnings Had Been Ignored..
Children Killed, Ignorant Government..
Supposedly A 'Greater Power' They Represent..

Family
A Small Girl, Never Gonna Meet Her Dad..
Not Around For First Word, Or Her Grad..
Theres Always A Void In Her Life..
Always Something, Slashed With Strife..
She Gets Into Drugs, Needles, Hash, Pot..
In Her Heart, Eternally, An Empty Spot..

Questions
Why Did He Have To Go To Fight Terror..
Knew He Was Worthy, But All Make Errors..
He Thought He Could Take Them All Himself..
All Thats Left Now, His Picture On A Shelf..
The Power Of War Is Deep And Contagious..
So Many Soldiers, Overly Courageous..

America The Beautiful
I Saw America Rise And Never Fall..
Stood Our Ground, Not To Be Enthralled..
I Saw Terror Flee From Our Success..
No More Hurting ,or Distress..
And Right Before My Very Eyes..
I Saw Families Torn And Soldiers Die..
And Right Before My Very Eyes..
I Saw Enemies Work Together, Allies..
And Right Before My Very Eyes..
I Saw Terror Fall, and America Rise..

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God Bless All The Soldiers...

-Sureal

He decided not to show. So I'm going to battle you ok? I'll post mine up in about 10 mins, aight.

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As I walked down the cold dark alley, there was only one thing in my mind
To get to the hospital as fast as I could, I couldn't waste any time.
At my house in my one room apartment, I got the sudden call.
Picked up my bags, my life would be changed once and for all.
The car that I owned, a Ford Taurus, I sold it, So I'd have to run
Running down the suburban street, under the early rays of the sun
I entered the hospital, without a single breath
I couldn't even stutter the name, blood rushing through my head
I managed to mutter "Evans" under the gasps that I had
The nurse said "Room 103, I hope your really fast..."
I bolted down the hall, I knew that their was little time left
Running down the endless halls, until I reached room 103.
The doctor was yelling "I KNOW YOU CAN DO THIS!" as loud as ever could be
And then it happened, with a loud and sudden shriek
The baby had been born right there, I was happy as could be
For I had seen my son been born right their in the bright and coming morn
It happened Right before my eyes I would be sad no more...



There, for once, I made a happy story....

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Ahhhh Dam this is hard.
but........................
no hate.
i'ma vote for mad-man.....
his verse was more lively and enjoyable to read
you both had a good concept and imagery
but mad's stood out a lil more
Mad ended it really well and that
decided it.

Vote = mad man

either way ...mad man is gay........settin himself up for a championship battle......nice sig by the way mad.......battle me....
and i will rip u............and if real voters see.....surreal easily took this but i ain't votin.......

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this is fucked up.. this is me vs. un-skrypted... not me vs. mad man...
he no showed... so i win this week.. the winner of the mad man fgee battle was supposed to get a shot next week...


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.......I Do Not Find This Fair... But Whatever...

Yo, I did end up beating Fgee, so we'll meet NEXT week. I just wanted to give people something to vote on. This battle means nothing though, I just knew that not everyone had their 5 votes. Settle down their big guy. Your still the champ....for now...lol

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Alright, That's Strait . . .

Cuz Each Opponent I Face I Look Back At Their Old Topicals...
And Then I Write My Verse According To Their Skill And Shit...
And I Wrote This For Un-Skrypted Not You... Heh...
So I'm Now 5-0 In Sacred Scriptures Then...
Vote On This Kids... Not For Anything, Just To Get Yo' 5 Votes..

-Sureal

I Liked Mad Man's Verse...It Was Good To Read But I'm Leaning More Towards Sureal...I Liked The Way He Used How He Seen All The Shit Goin On In The World And Still See America Rise Right Before His Eyes...I Thought That Was A Good Way To Deliver The Topic...No Hate Towards Mad Man But I Liked Sureal's Verse Better...

Vote - Sureal

(Does This Count As A 5th Vote Coz I Got 4 Already?)

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mad...i got one thing to say to ur ass....i noticed u been talkin shit on me......i'm not even gonna hate back....just remember this....when u battled that one cat who dissed on ur dead grandma...who had ur back?....when knightshade pulled that bullshit on u....who had ur back?......me...thats who.....so i'm gonna let u run off at the mouth and do what u do......just remember....i'm the one who alwayz kept it real.......peace

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