so many things my ways I aint gon never fess up/
I put so much out niggaz wont never catch up/
talk recklace i'll put somethin on your shirt that look like ketchup/
I'll chase u until u fall like bitches in jason movies/
I must of been drinkin earlier cause I feel kinda woozy/
that aint nothin it takes a murder just to move me/
ignorance won't help u nigga your bound for a death wish/
put spit on the tip of the pistol fuck u nigga heres ya death kiss/
pull the grip from my hip now u understand this/
u can be known nationwide like your local insurance agency/
i'll leave u flat on the pavement your tears wont phase me/
put hot sauce on ya shirt in case u misbehaving/
my bullets graze past ya face and give u a clean shaving/
Im the greatest since the emancipation of proclamation/
since the daclaration of my knowledge of street information/
the pigs been on my dick since the whole situation/
a few banana clips unloaded would end my frustration/
dont get ya self caught in the moment i'll give u encore presence/
i'll teach u a lesson i can clear ya set in a matter of seconds/
who u think u testin methods is restricted to the use of weapons/
my dialogue is causin trouble and i feel alot of anger/
using my mouth as a weapon puts me in alot of danger/
my life is filled wit more loops than coat hangers/
I got a whole group behind me like united nation/
i would excrete more but i aint got no patience/

this gets 20 IQ points

Thanx for the reply

You have good vocab and rhyming abilities, tyr to sue them more complexly, but still this was a tight drop..It flowed well, used some good wordplay + keep it up!

yea, well... I ain't think it was all that hot... amybe a sun-tan or somethin'... lol, like rythmic said u need to up the complexity an' try some better wordplay... 1

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thanx for the advice yall