u spit first but u gotta check in
no d/h/c votes
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yo ill vote as soon as both of you post up, while you are waiting can you hit one of my battles from my sig up honestly.......thanx 1

when did i reply to this.............................................. ...................
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u wrote in my bitch slapped forum thingy it was called looking for a battle remember????? if u dont i will send you the link to refresh your memory

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jus bac online...here's a few bars of my head...since i forgot about this shit

After this battle you’ll be there wit yo hood up,
Say that your beatin me is making you corrupt/
Not even wit a 'vets' advice could you take the win,
I’m such a sick 'dawg' n my diseases are 'breedin'/
Lyrics got a hold on this 'cat' like me wit 'pussy',
I eat you out(rhymes) n you’re left pleased sex-ually/
I’m 'fuckin up' ya whole life and ya words 'mate',
But your not 'fertile'(rhymes) yet your 'period' late/*
I’m never stop cuz I (w)rap you till the ‘fullest’,
Your 'hollow' so it’s gonna take time finishin-this/
2 minutes the most cuz I’m hitting from the loin,
Servin 'mea't size like smorgasboard yet like 'sirloin'/**
Dolorous I’m spittin is like 'groins' getting 'castrated',
Your clueless cuz your 'ball-less' n i’ve jus berated/

*(full stop of the end of his rhyme)
**(sirloin-best cut of meat, smorgasboard-all you can eat)

'......' is not the rhymes, it's the asscociation of words to make the shit easier to follow.

~1~uppin for ya bars

ight just signed on but damn im tired ill spit in like 30 minuets cause its like 8:00 my time aight. that was a nice line man i gotta give u props

ur rhymes dont flow its not what im needin/
u went from corrupt to breedin to havin sex eatin/

ur raps are is dull like the pencil you used to write your verse down before it even started/
better find a new oppenent cause your ass is starting to look retarted/

ur flow is as straight as a tornado spinnin to every place/
get of rb ur a disgrace to the human race, so find another place/

god i can tell this aint the place for you look at your name pot1ent/
ur like a nerd in math class that already knows the Quotient /

talkin bout pussy when u cant get it you must be a raper/
ur rymes are more recycled then plain white paper/

sayin your good enough youll never be able to beat a vet/
dog your delirous after this battle i think your gonna need a vet/

after this battle your head will be in a blur/
my rhymes are extice theyll make you feel like you got hit by a 2 by 4/

aight that was nothing cause im tired and i just wanted to get the battle over with now ima go fall asleep and when i wake up we should get most of the results

uppin 4 votes............................................. ....................................
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potent jus because the other cat sucked
weak battle from both sidesa though
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both sides quite weak on punches, blood you REALLY need to lengthen your vocan, i mean practically 50% of start of lines was UR FLOW or UR RHYMES or UR VERSE, be more creative.
Giving this one to pot1ent, punches were weak both ways, but his flow was consistant, and had better creativity.

word up P good shit that other guy WHO? was wack sorry cuz!!!!

Im gonna have to vote P, look up my shit against pimped money if its cool honest votes doh!!!!

Peace both mc's

Vote = Pot

He juss came harder with punches and had better meta's............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ....................................


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