Listen,.. if it's written.. read it..
realize that this life in pages, famous inscriptions.//
you must be dumb
shit's right in-front-ya, still claimin' it's encrypted.//
raise tha roof.. fuck that just up-lift um.//


I ain't claimin' to be tha best emcee, or say tha rest is weak.//
I'm just say'n if they chest is meek I ain't let them speak.//
they gotta learn ta voice themself, poised an' proud.//
make they choices now, before the pot's boilin' down.//
options run out an' they stuck on a rock in a pipe in they mouth.//
or up hands locked, on a mic.. standin' trial.//
and denial... what's with it, just another road block.//
like a personal cold-cock, flat on ya ass, "wrap" like a cold-cut.//
an' we be like so what! it's their path, they made a decision.//
walked away from incision, created they own prison-a mind.//
an' denied etrenal wisdom-a mind, replaced it ta sit-on-da grind.//
9-5, fuck that, I plan-on livin' my life, that's why I'm livin' my rhymes.//

<<HOOK>>


I'm done... lol, I get bored of this crap fast still... I ain't think it's that good ne-way

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kinda short, but you pointed that out, it would be hott with at least 1 other verse....

Anyway, This was dope, the flow was sick, and the multis were capital!

I agree but it was still hot to me.
Holla

ya, I might add one later..... I'm too tired, that shit took me like an hour almost... usually I'm like half that 4 a 3 verse song... lol

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BLUNT, DON'T GIVE YOUSELF A HEADACHE WHEN YOU'RE TIRED TRYING TO RUSH LINES LIKE THIS OUT BECAUSE YOU'RE TOO TALENTED AND GIFTED FOR STUFF LIKE THIS. IT WAS AIIGHT. PEACE!

why do I care... I pop off 1 or 2 bad rhymes now an' then... only the good ones get recorded

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THe flow was pretty good on there, content was aiight, stright to the point with not to much wordplay, so that depends on the reader if thats good or not. Highlight of this was the flow

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Bang On The Table Productions

seen, I'm-a put up somethin' better soon e-nuff

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I ain't claimin' to be tha best emcee, or say tha rest is weak.//
I'm just say'n if they chest is meek I ain't let them speak.//

Great beginning...should've made it longer though...love your style...give it to 'em