20 lines max
whatevas whateva
you first...

Whyte Mocha on tha mic bringin tha beef to a closure/
I'll spit one line, you'll be showin like "indecent exposure"/
Yo rhymes style is bitch and so is yo personality/
Come on your block and i'll make you a fatality/
Don't give a shit bout talkin, disgrace to your name/
Illegal clown means "bitch who ain't got game/
i'm a classic my rhymes shine like dimes/
definate rhyme killa but your shit is undifined/
youz a parabole, a parody, a punk ass bitch/
cuts with my style i'll leave you in stitch/
don't even know ya name youz a no namesta/
rappin fake shit, coke dealen internet wanksta/
you rappin fake shit, you know whats worse/
you talk shit that gets niggas put up in a hearse/
fuck around with your style as i plunder and i pillage/
but your shit be all "tainted" like this was slum village/
you fuckin internet wanksta, its ova and you done/
when it comes to spitten tha game "there can be only one."

Thats it man im done peace

ok...
see im the kinda guy/
who puts it down in every rhyme/
shit you only worth 10 cents, its coo you a dime/
see i sit here 'n' wonda why they even let you register/
if it was be, you'd be wit oscar da grouch in a trash canister/
cuz you really makin me sick/
yo rhymes leave an odor 'n' stench/
dat smells like yo mama pouch, da equivalent of tuna fish/
take the lesson, and apply it/
you shouldnt be so dam defiant/
you say wanksta so much Eminem gon want you as a client/
you'll be 50's hype man/
singin in da background at da concerts/
thought you was gettin a compliment, til you realized the truth hurts/
see you'll only get fame/
by wearin out otha artists rhymes ya lame/
nobody'll know yo name, they'll jus say/
HEY THERE GOES THAT GUY AGAIN/
haha you really thought you was hard, you really thought you would win/
but i guess you went limp, well its viagra time again

you think you tight man suckpa a dick!

aighttt..both verses pretty weak on the punch tip...as fo flow i'm goin with illegal clown...his flow was betta and disses were betta too...vote=illegal...oneeee

yo i vote for Whyte Mocha
cuz his shit made more sense and he had the better punches.....
both have to elevate......

peace!

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my vote goes to whyte mocha..... thats a whack name dawg..... you both need to elevate but whites made more sense and flowed better...... dont rap about klilling eachother.... WAY PLAYED

oh yeah.... hit up my battle now...... vote fairly.... i did on this one....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60335

rappin fake shit, coke dealen internet wanksta/
you rappin fake shit, you know whats worse/
you talk shit that gets niggas put up in a hearse/

The first two lines...eh...what's with repeating "rappin fake shit"?
And the last line sounds like you're proppin him.

when it comes to spitten tha game "there can be only one."

That coulda been a dope Highlander reference...
If ya'd thrown more into it...

But even with all that...
Ya still managed to beat the clown.

His was ultra simple and dull.

At least Mocha has a grasp of what battlin is...

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come on ya'll up tha votes
you know who to vote for
Mocha what.
whats taking so long with all tha votes.
i shoulda had this thing won a long time ago

iight my vote goes to mocha....i mean both of ya'll will be alot better once you elevate on the site...but mocha knew a lil bit about what he was doin...wasn't jus tryin to rhyme

vote = mocha

come on ya'll up tha votes
you know who to vote for
Mocha what.
whats taking so long with all tha votes.
i shoulda had this thing won a long time ago

iight my vote goes to mocha....i mean both of ya'll will be alot better once you elevate on the site...but mocha knew a lil bit about what he was doin...wasn't jus tryin to rhyme

vote = mocha
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