aight dawg u spit first
10-15 lines
no dick ryders
no crew votes
check in, then spit

aight here we go man show me ur stuff

u looking like the bitch from 'sesame street'
u like guyz 'tickling ur elmo' or being beat
but if if u were funny like 'jack black'
apparantly just like 'shallow hal' u'll get whacked
the prewritten stuff is bad, like 'chris rock'
when ur in 'bad company' u'll probly suck cock
but the end is near like the show 'full house'
guess those damn 'olsen twins' couldn't find a spouse
but alas its the end and it's almost 'thanksgiven'
and the 'goosen' must be killed or it must start spitten

you think that i pre-write my shit, like a prehistoric in a cave//
the only thing pre-written, is the inscription on your grave//
if you knew just 'Who' i was, you'd need lubricant and a tissue//
when magazines want to tribute me, its a 'Special Double Issue'//
When Goosen enters Front Lines, niggas making such a fuss//
when you want to get revenge, you do your drive-by's in a bus//
There's gonna be a huge party, to celebrate my victor-ee//
Your not on the invite list, and ive got the 'V-I-P'//
The sector involving child abuse? i bet you haven't got a clue//
But your gonna be finding out real soon, it's called the S-V-U//
They call me 'Big Poppa Pump', because ill 'fell' you like a tree//
when your 'falling' to the ground, 'Holla If Ya Hear Me!'//

igght dawg good luck. lets get some votes

Goosen won dis wit betta vocab,flow, and puns. If ya could hit up my battle vs docmeth wit an honest vote.

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Vote=Goosen

Better Punches... Better Flow... Better Verse....

You Both Need To Work On Punches... I See Potential In Goosen... And Vip911... You Need To Work On Flow As Well... Take A Look Around Elite Front Lines And See How They Set Up And Structure Their Punches...

I Can't Poll Vote Anyways... Never Lets Me... But Thats My 2 Cents

^Oh... And Vip... Wordplay Is Good To Have But You Need To Put More Punches In And Incorporate Wordplay When You Elevate More...

i'll gyve thys one 2 goosen
he just had better punches and wordplay
overall it flowed better 2.
both have some room 2 elevate though......
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Goosen...

I love a WWE reference, ya Big Bad Booty Daddy!

I'm a sucker for them!

But ya had this won without it.

I wasn't really into VIP's constant screen references...

Too much of a good thing, ya know.

Plus, it was just to short and simple.

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I'mma go with Goosen on this battle. Goosen's verse was better overall. (flows, metas, punches,etc....)

VIP911 - Keep ya head up, keep battling, and elevate, always remember to elevate.

vote - Goosen


Peace~

Alright VIP, you tryed against yet another vet. You have done something alot of people on this site haven't done. You have earned my respect. But I am truly sorry, you didn't earn my vote. Yes, you got wordplay, but it was only the first two lines that even looked like they were directed at him. Elevate, read a little bit of the battling guide, and you'll get better. A few words for the Goose, that wasn't your best, I felt you were either taking this battle off, or something. However, you get my vote.

Votee=Goosen

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