[Close Eyed Stare, My Blade Rises, It’s Soul Spewing Violent Smiles//
Arose From My Chair, Sigh Made, Entices Those Viewing To Silence For Miles//
All Around Nod Knowingly, Faith In My Sharpened Fierce Edge//
Call To Surround, Lodged Going Deep, Too Late, Metal Harkened To Pierce Flesh//
Blood Drips From The Tip, Split Tongue For Victory//
Love Lives Hidden On Lips, Rip And Lunge In Sold Sickened-Feats//
Drop My Weapon, Cry Quiet Eyes, Or Blind Limbs, Fall Dumb Witted To My Knees//
Stop My Upsettin? Lie Low As Riot Fires To Find Him, Saul Commited Better Deeds//
People Who Cheered Witless For My Task, Now Pay For My Head On A Stake//
Steeples Do Appear, Witnessed As My Only Chance, Brow Shakes Slow, “DIE!” Chants Spread As I Quake//
Church Door Bursts Forcibly Open, Stalling, Then Out Pours Women, Children, Lances At Ready, Come Militia//
Lurch Forth, Search For The One Broken, Crawling For Sound, More, Listen, Lead Fill Him, Chance Little We’ll Miss Yah//
Rifles Poised, Pitchforks, Shovels, Spades, Rakes, All Weave Through Aisle After Aisle, Torches Lighting//
Sifle Noise, Bitch Lurks On Levels And States Of Hate, The Bereaved Soon Pile, Laughter Sky High, Scorches Brightening//
Bastard Discovered, Hatred Thermometers Breakin, Deny Pleasure, His Own Gun Ramming Own Ione Head//
Last Learned, Uncovered Sacred Unsure Bombs Bitter, Naked Now Lie Deader, Miss-Toned, Run, Family Now Prone To Death//
Crowd Mutters, The Show They Wanted Cancelled, Panic Concealed, Leave Stuttering, Hell Was Crimson, Seams In Mires Wishfully//
Loud Clutters, Slow Brakes, Taunted From Ransom, Static Congealed, Fluttering, Television Dreams Expire Fitfully//]

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hot, hot shit fam...real deep...u really impressed me with this...8.1/10

peep this if ya have the time: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61025

UPPIN FOR MY NIGGA

dis was hott as fuck. real deep . i was feelin dis shit fo sho. nice multis and vocab.

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Uppin...

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TIGHT drop dawg best i've read 4 long while man, gud wordplay n metas n kept the flow goin 2! impressive! keep it up, 4real!

will ya check my drop its called first open mic on the thread but its actually called shit happens, check it n giv me sum feed bac, thanx!

real deep imagery...you captured the frantic mobbing militia scene well...could've had a more readable structure but that's not taking anything away from this because the scene described confusion...all and all a 9...peace

Uppin This Piece Summore

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Ugh..Im Gettin Un-Noticed Again..

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hot ish man i was really feelin this

Uppin Fa Feedback..

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Uppin This Once More...

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fuck man...that was ta-it....dope as hell....full of dope multies....full of fuckin fresh vocab......ill shit man....


ohhh...yo...chek my shit out...SHORT AND SWEET...pz

Uppin For More Feedback...

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^^^'n

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uhh, yea, that was a tight drop, good vocab, keep it up