Me And Ma Boys Paceone ANd Critical Hot Trust me

http://www.soundclick.com/krucialopenmics
theres the link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=60459

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4256#post574256

uppin

i'm the only nigga on earth who don' t fill this beat
1st cat flow seem on point...lyrically str8...nothin too razzle dazzle

2nd cat..not really feelin the accent...sound like u australian or somethin...flow not bad but ya voice kinda ruin it...lyrically aiight nothin that really caught my ear

3rd cat don't really got mic presence to hold the listeners attention...and lyically ain't nothin really gettin me..."like curiosity i kill you cat" ..nah mean thatz a lil too simple

if i came out like i was dissin yaw..i didn't really mean too
but i'm jus givin my opinions...i'm not really feelin yaw voices
and you could use some hotta rhyme scheemes and uppin ya lyrical game...as well as improvin delivery....but yaw stayed on beat..and yaw flows aren't bad..jus elevate

thats man i like when people be staight up

i was feelin it. I recon it was pretty tite.

uppin

nice man

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