the role of jerks placed upon me as I tried to
audit for god waking up from it all I know its
time to move on as it passes knowledge is
gained while wisdom lingers where can I picture my
frame when its over will it be a suit and
tie typin or a pen and the tips of my fingers
thats word so screw your chicks drinks and
laughs im past the past you dont care for this
mans health therefore do bad by your damn self
everyones mind contains a prison prejudice
and visions loves miles away but those werent
my intentions to be like this all on my knees like this
while my minds painting pictures thatll never see its
work end when im dead and gone over me people
may begin conversin probaly not though more concerned
on the way they got dough the past is passed theres
only hope for the future as a husband a loser semi thuggin
like no smoke no drink no shots ill shoot ya if pipe
dreams didnt keep building up for this music id probaly
do it money motivates and separates breeds envy
an hatred adversaries tossin bullets gotta dodge
like the matrix fantasy to reality remains a revolving
door of karma ive had enough and if your plans
are ucked theres no more drama is there?

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alright....i was gonna do my whole breakdown constructive critism thing...but the fact that i aint know where to cut between the lines...it made it hard for it to break it bar by bar that u actually didnt do....

well...lemme see..this is like a long sentence thought out...sure it was interesting...its like when u read it...u have to hold ur breath for awhile...i dont know maybe its just me and how i read it...*shrugs*

the content is somewhat semi typical...but how u structured it made ur piece really stood out there...

and yeah flowz...im looking for ur views on the next picture we gonna put up..i read urs and its really amazing...

mad props to this simple piece...drop more!

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Nice to see you back Contenflo (aye, i remember that name..i got a small little section in my hole filled brain which specilises in 'RB'....weird...)..

But yeah. Like always, you come with a raw depth. And along with that, a certain amount of crypticism that at times shrouds your pieces with a web of incomprehensibility (dunno if that's a word).. What i mean is, the reader has to dig into it more. And though he/she may find a meaning, it wont always be the one you were trying to get acorss. And i can most definetly dig that. From a personal perspective as well as an obsever one...

...though i felt towards the end it tailed off a bit witheringly...the core of it was very strong.

..resp....

if you read this to actually picked up the
flow I appreciate it and its there if you actually
read it forreal thanks again

.................................................I f You Really Dont Like Me....Dont Fuccin Vote For Me...deep breaht...goodday now peace

I liked you

I know it's there man. It's come on a lot. It's a hard style to execute, you've churned it out though...

wow that was excellent

u keep up the good work

u had me readin the whole thing i usally never do that if there long like that