(*laughing*)

(*spoken memory*)
stop this shit//
stop this bitch//
ill kill u, ill make u bleed at my feet//
like u killed me//

laughing like u own me//
laughing at the words i write//
laughing cos i cant fight//
laughing cos u think its right//
laughing tonight ill kill u like my husband slit his wifes throat//
laughing but tonight ill make u bleed as i laugh at ur pain!! u wont be croaking//
laughing HAHA u think dis be a joke//
laughing ill slit ur mothafucking throat//
laughing bitch dont threaten me wit a glock//
laughing im crazy ill still slit ur throat, i wont choke//
not till ur final breathe is finally spoke//


*laughing fades*

this aint a joke//
this aint emotion//
this is a poem, of devotion//
destruction//
blood driping on earth//

^Agrees With Title ... It Is Shit.. Whack Stuff ... Put More Time And energy Into The Stuff You Write

Man....If u know that u didnt put any effort into writing ur lyrics , then dont post it...FUCKIN DUMBASS.........Delete this thread....WHACK MUTHA FUCKA

i know its shit and wacked but so wot? i need to practise even if it aint my best. only way to improve aint it

i didnt find any concept behind this drop except for wackness...polluting my brainwaves readin that shit...elevate your shit like takin dumps on airplanes namean...wahid

word sorry bloodlust this was the worst shit ever, worse than all yo other drops, u just gotta study, go to the emergency centre aight

eborted verdict-U

Hmm... I agree

I Say Take A Trip Down To The WEC, Get Some Advice, Tips etc...

Make Your Vocab more Expansive, Get A Better Topic, And Rap About It. It Usually Helps If You Have Something That You Can Velate To, LIke My Piece On life In Northern Ireland (it's On One Of The Open Mic Pages - "What It's Like"), Or Have A Look At Some Of Sand's Or Word~Perfects Shit, You Can Get Some Straight Up Idea's..

Keep Elevatin!