iight rules like this..........8 bar max.......2 lines = 1 bar...

verses due in 45 min...9:15.....lets go check in....1

alright 45 mins you shoulda made the bar max higher than 8


unless u wanna change it to something higher
ill deal with it



checkin in....

no short and sweet easy for the voters...........lets go.........1

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so what im young i got a whole site in envy of my skill/
and after this battle youll be as common as the 2 dolla bill/

darin-me, knowin i'm spit sicker than you'd ever care-to-be/
i slash you so fast that the gash'll be scared-to-bleed/

ima hit you up 42 times and i aint missen...ya head might as well be hallow/
so fucked up EMT's mistakin you for Amadu Diallo/

see this subliminal force is sicker then eating a pussy with "GENITAL WORTS"/
this kid couldnt cop SKILLS if GANGSTAR was sellin them at the doller "GENERAL STORE"/

I'm gonna win this battle,so there's no reasin to explain this situation/
For the simple fact "your far from being dope like crackheads on vacation"/

I'm way iller, sicker and elevated than you so tell everyone around/
Because everyone knows your like them "Twin Towers" because your "levels on the ground"/

You may "think your hard" like a "man taking viagra in his dreams" but you "soft" like tissue/
X will shove some magazines down ya throat and really Force-The-Issue/

Signin on as me the only time he'll show up as good/
im the type to "shove the top of his jacket down his throat" and make him "throw up his hood"/

ur up...........................drop u got liek 15 min.......lerts go...............

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::start::
..ayo lets 'Rewind-The-Snitching' your "Behind-The-Bitching"
..no one "feels you" like "disabled lesbians" practicing "Vagina-Licking"
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..like ''hymlec manuevers'' ill have you chokin and 'clutchin-ya-throat'..
..punchin-this-joke..you only "posses illness" when you quoting 'sumthin-I-wrote'.. 2

..this faggot is only puttin on a *gangsta scene* cuzthis 'man-acts-with-thugz'..
..stoppin flows like tampax-and-blood..Im known spread "illness to minds" like placin 'anthrax-on-mugz'..3

..this geek-is-jokin..X is like "lung cancer patient's fam" askin me to 'please-stop-smokin'..
..your defeat-provoken..how you gon ''march out of war'' when both ya 'kneeze-are-broken'..mr.warlord..4

..words will trap-ya-fleet..faggot ''keeps scratchin illness'' like causing ''scabs-to-bleed''..
..ya raps-are-weak..Im like "felines overdosing on roofies" the
way i put this "'cat-to-sleep"....5

..Ill rip-ya-spine..like "self promoting musicians" observe and listen to these 'hits-of-mine'..
..punishin faggots when i get-the-time..like "organized marching bands'' im tellin this wack to 'step-in-line'..6
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..If ya look-deep into my heart you'll see That the "kid-spits-Rare"
..I'll treat ya face like "hollywood cement" & leave my footprints-there 7
::tha kid will be famous::
..lol but look This Fools whack enough to steal "Will Smith's" rhyme schemes
..believe He's guilty! Clumsy fuck left "Fresh Prints" at the crime~scene 8 im done


fresh prints : fresh prince -- for tha slow...





start the Uppin .. short battle no need to sleep



good spit X

hi dont have 100 votes but if i could vote it would for x ecution, a lot better ounches and it sounds better with tha flow..
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thx hottie but we need some real votes..............

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drop a linkn ill hit it up.....1

thanks for your opinion angel .. keep postin you'll be at 100 before you know it

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I can see you people need votes so Ima help you out.

X had a great flow, harder punches and some nice wordplay.
Shock had great wordplay but his punches and flows weren't matching up to X.


Vote=X

Hit up my battle with an honest vote since I helped you out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61099

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we need some votes.....drop a link and ill hit it up..............1

Yo, both of you came heavy, big ups for both of you, I'd go wit X tho just cause he had some more methods and wordplay, a little tighter that's all, punches were good on both sides so its tough to say,
much respect to both of y'all
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