[RMT walks into his home and catches his first girlfriend and bestfriend on the couch]

{RMT}
What the hell's goin on here, Who do you think you are?
messin wit my emotions, on my heart u left a scar!
Was I not providin' enough for ya, was it somethin' I did?
That's messeded up, you were my misses and u had my kid!
You said holy matremony for the rest of our lives!
You better watch out I'm soo close to grabbin the knives!
It aint even cheatin' you did it with my friend.
Pack your stuff girl this is now the end.
The end of you and me, u messed it up, cant u see?
I guess u felt u weren't free, burnt ma heart to the 4th degree!
Why would you do this to me? What about our daughter?
Don't push me girl, or you'll be with Kim in the water!
Anger fillin my head with evil thoughts that need to be released,
FORGET YOU, man, I wouldn't care if you and her were both deceased!
Why would you do this to me? Don't you have a conscious?
Don't hurt you? You won't feel it, you'll be unconscious!
Messin wit my girl behind ma back, without any remorse?!?
It'll all be over soon, your bout to get shot, like a disabled horse!
Can't think I'm filled with so much anger and hate.
You ruined our friendship and stole ma Soulmate!
Don't know what i was thinkin, a punkass and a cheater!
How could i not notice? Maybe i shoulda been a wife beater!
You both betta get outta MY house before I get my machete!
Won't be a pretty site, red'll be everywhere like you spilt spaghetti!
My best friend and my wife, now thats sick and twisted!
Time to finish em, I'll make it look like you both neva existed!

{Chorus}
What would you do,
if this happened to you?
What would you do,
if this was true?
What u you do
if you was in this situation
What would u do
if ya home boy and girl was datin


[RMT comes home from werk and catches his new girlfriend wit his bestfriend in his bed]

{RMT}
Yo,Whats this I see,I must be havin blurred vision
Cheat on me,lovely,thats ya own grave ya diggin
I aint kiddin,you cheat on me wit my bestfriend
Trigger in my head,snapped,thats ya deathbed
Pollutin,my room,Didnt respect me the least
Stained my heart,permanent semen stain on sheets
How could you do this to me,I bought u the Gucci
The mercedes Benz,the house, and the jewelry
You livin a fantasy life,thas all because of me
I guess when Im away being wit my boy is tempting
But there aint no excuse both you were wrong
Naw get back here homie,where u think u going?
You messed up ya'll both going to pay the price
Like witchcraft,Im taking heads for sacrifice
You supposed to be my girl,and you was my jigga
Finger on the trigga,cus I know u was after figures
The more I look at you two,the sicker I get
My soul been damaged,so now its bleedin and shit
Ok now that I got that out tha way and off my head
Clost ya'll eyes because both of you is dead
Damn cant believe what I did,I never killed
Until now,while Im drivin to a open field
Now Im diggin this hole,2nd chance what I crave
Naw forget that,now that ya'll buried I spit on ya grave

{Chorus}

uppin

This was average, It would prolly strike a chord with the females with the sensitivity and the subject of relationships, but it's a bunch of niggas on here so don't excepct alot of positive feedback. As far as skill wise you got the raw talent, hopfully you pick up on some of the fundmentals and make yourself a better emcee, you know being more slick with your wordplay, more creative with what you want to say, not rhyming just one word a line, shit like that.
Keep at it, Dirty

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iight thanx dawg, uppin for more feedbak