no hate, d/r, crew/friend votes
NO BITING
dont take more than a few hours to spit, try to match my time
14-16 lines
check in (just say "im here") then i post my verse.

well if u aint gunna check in im postin now so u know i dont pre-write. fukn spit soon.
aight....

heartburn thats the only way anyone 'feels' acid//
too much masturbation has left ur dick permanently flaccid// (flaccid is the opposite of erect)
ur spits about as ill as if ud swallowed disinfectant//
nearly had a clean record, but now ive gone and wrecked it//
i seen ur one battle u spit like 15 lines without one punch//
but with a name like 'Acid Rhymes' i shouldnt expect much//
if ur verse was a package it'd be 90% filler polystyrene//
rap like a child, "moms got vanilla flavour ice-cream"//
couldnt punch in the 'mike' if u had lessons from 'tyson//
with no timing, rhyming, flow u suck harder than 'dyson// (dyson = vaccum cleaner brand)
you bitch newbies got ego's larger than verses//
cant spit a decent verse so u fill it full of curses//
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look here - for a newbie i'll put it simply worded//
like diseased live stock, ur best left un-herded (un-heard-ed)//

yo man i just woke up.. i swear on my mom life i did..n e wayz ill spit soon.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............................

aiyyo...
so ur da manic killaa?, well get ready to meet... the blood spillaaa///
bitch u need to feel-aaa..., beat or 2.. mureder you wit my...chinchillaaa///1
im da big dealaa...and now we'll need to seal-aaa///2
another bodybag, cuz im done wit dis niggaaa///3
callin me a newbe, iunno wat chu heard///4
but "un-herded"... ain't even a fuckin' word///5
in a 2man battle, you'll end up third///6
i don't even know why i fuck with this fairy rap shit///7
chap stick, is what u faggots shove up ur last dick///8
rap sick, is what i do, and i spit like im some kind of battery acid///9
come back with, punchlines that are mastered///10
kill any mother fucker, bitch, dyke, or bastered///11
an im bout to leave this fuckin game///12
i don't need any fuckin fame, don't need ur fuckin lame shit ///13
spit, you should close ur mouth cuz shit is comin out of it///14

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maniac won this because of the punches. acid, some of ur rymes didnt even make sense, like the very end one. wtf??? u just add rhyming words to ur punches which totally ruined some of it.

vote= maniac

like the one with the added rhyming word, chap stick, which had nothing to do with anything.

also check out mah batles in my sig

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haha nice. Loved the finisher on Manic's. Keep up the good werk d00d.

STILL fuck the rulz that says no votes till 100 posts!

punches:AR
floh:MK
Creativity:AR
Overall:MK
Vote: MK

Vote on my shit,,,,,,,poll it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

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Good battle but i'mma go with Manic Killer, he had good flow, nice punches and his finisher was good, I jsut believe he came harder than acid, but Acid's verse was good too
keep ya head up

vote - Manic Killer

Hit this up with a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62203

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uh huh two more vote to KO this dood

vote-Manic

better punches and flow basically won it for him.......

peace

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