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Old 06-30-03, 08:54 AM   #1
Narcicyst
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Camel Spit (quick spit)

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my tales are like earthquakes measured on scales/
i'm erecting this death chant like failed heart rates/
i nail the rythm...
if you a carpenter who front your competion/
then failed to listen, about paying the different price like retail commision/
usually after us, unless you get the best of them like anthologies/
i'm soon to be diagnoused with off the hook retarded speech/
its probably because i got childrens whos parents siblings constantly calling me/
obviously fucking with my family is not easy/
whether its talk or verbals are rest assured like SM 58 insurance policy/
its not my fault your whole residential is made on a mochary/
my stamina is a suffered entity, that claims to have started anarchy/
you're Mad like Alfred E. when your bitch howls like the rules of jocking me/
my flyness alone surpasses crowds of peeps of ground zero tolerating me/
my anthropology's speciality is digging deep like ant colonies/
your counterparts are counterfeit cleverly revealed by my prophecies/
to split my knowledge to be the bomb like Einstein for atom technology/
gotta get mine obviously, underground blitzkreague tactics/
the aftermath is that of an explosion in Count Draculas habitat, bitch/
froze out after Patrick calling you over, so dead all the commotion/
now thats plain to see like aircrafts stalling in oceans....

taking you all out
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Old 06-30-03, 08:55 AM   #2
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Yo dog
u wanna have a Flow battle?
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Old 06-30-03, 09:02 AM   #3
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thru audio?
yo what you think of this quick spit?
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Old 06-30-03, 09:04 AM   #4
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yeah dog i respect ur shit

But listen set up a battle
This is a Flow Battle, like the shit u just posted, just longer
u can talk about anythin, spit about ne thin u want
No this aint guna be audio, Just set it up, and ill spit first
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Old 06-30-03, 10:16 AM   #5
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sorry dawg i aint a battle mc...but i got people in A.I. that will battle you...wahid
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Old 06-30-03, 10:21 AM   #6
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aight well tell one of ur boys to battle me

tell him its a FLOW-BATTLE
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Old 06-30-03, 10:30 AM   #7
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aight bet dunny...you gonna get eaten up though dunny...wahid
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Old 06-30-03, 10:32 AM   #8
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aight well wut the hell yous waitin for

listen dont post a msg back

just tell any1 of your friends to set up a flow battle in front lines
I'll be waitin lookin for my name.............
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Old 06-30-03, 01:04 PM   #9
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uppin this one
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Old 06-30-03, 01:49 PM   #10
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nice spit

like da vocab
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Old 06-30-03, 02:11 PM   #11
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yo ill battle one of u if u think u can take me 2 the grave, nice shit man thats the sort of shit i wana be hearing not fucked up bollocks
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Old 06-30-03, 03:02 PM   #12
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yea THAT WAS HOTT I WAS FEELIN THAT SHIT

u need ta work on gettin sum more metas in there though
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Old 06-30-03, 03:19 PM   #13
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aight thanks for the feedbacks...wahid
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Old 06-30-03, 09:34 PM   #14
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uppin^^
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Old 06-30-03, 09:46 PM   #15
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Vocabulary....now thats what we call DAMN good....i liked the words that u used with this one...just simply interesting...

FLOW...it came across that i had my tongue got twisted...lol..nahh its just that thew flow was smooth..it just totally fits in with the piece

Content...really interesting...really nice ideas and yesh there are metas but not too much...props for that

OVER ALL...really good but i liked ur previous shits better...well u said that this was a quick spit so maybe u just didnt give ur 110% but yeah this was nice

madd drop!
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