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07-01-03, 09:08 AM | #1 | |
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Aint got none to worry
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*Keslo:"yo E Z, u heard bout that girl who gate raped and robbed by that crack head..?"
*E Z:"yeah,poor girl,12 years old,and dying of aids allready,all for some milk coupons and 15 quid" *Keslo:"damn,i mean,money aint a thing if u aint got non,but to go and do that,his ass is SLEEAAZY" whats the universe built on,if we hadnt got no money// all the silly lil things we do,like shoot a brudda in the tummy// its kinda funny,cuz i seen allot of greedy ppl sayin cash aint thing// wen theyre walkin up and down the street with teeth and chains that bling// bring the gin,because its time-to-tell a ghetto story// like the time "B" got his legs crushed wen he tried to jack a speeding lorrie// i heard em tore see,i saw the bonse click as he tried to run// and the reason he did it was he needed money to spend and have some fun// plus ghetto scum other wise known as the local waster// had a taster of thiefin bags off little ladies,and also raped her// he probly needed crack,but most of all he needed paper// i remember all those years ago he had a job,as a hotshot water// ill see him later,pull-a-gun and probly-pop-one// cuz lil girls dont need to die a young age of H.I.V or AIDS son// come on and save one,let your shit FLY like beannie SEAGLE// adress ya world and drop a verse like ya dropin a speach to all ya people// this lifes a steep hill,you need some cash to be respected// george bush had all the money he needed way before he got elected// is life selected,were we put here to struggle cashles// let all the richest in the world laugh at the ghetos that are so helples// so let me tell this,if u aint got none,then it aint easy// but living life with wads of cash while watchin the hungry die is sleazy// |
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07-01-03, 09:12 AM | #2 | |
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uppin for feed back..!!
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07-01-03, 10:24 AM | #3 | |
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yo come on ppl....UPPIN..!!
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07-01-03, 11:40 AM | #4 | |
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yo this shit was actually aight. Wasnt the best but wasnt bad. If you keep elevatin you'll do better. And the story was great keep spittin.
7/10 Return the favor of my piece http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61711 |
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07-01-03, 11:53 AM | #5 | ||
Straight Savage.
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im havin to agree with withersman and shit...
this was an average drop. 7/10
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07-01-03, 02:00 PM | #6 | |
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any more...?!?!
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07-01-03, 06:52 PM | #7 | |
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n!ce 1 man good content, intresting subject, but i liked it your very creative, good work m8 jus keep ur head up n elevate dude
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07-03-03, 05:59 AM | #8 | ||
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This shit was aight, good topic, content a little thin at first, better vocab and better wordplay needed, but the last 6 lines are so was real good, liked the bush line
Keep writing and elevate dawg Eborted Verdict-C- |
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07-03-03, 02:28 PM | #9 | ||
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that shit was good i know i could never do that shit that u just did it was bad
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