ill spit first
10-15 lines
no biting
no feeding
no crew/dr votes
good luck

ight here we go

you couldn't 'rock', if your first name was 'roll'//
your like 'Kelly Rowland', all your lines are 'Stole'//
your as cold as an iceblock, i'm hot like salami//
when the pressure is on, you 'fold' like 'oragami'//
I'm lethal you know, 'spit' like a ‘sausage-on-grill’//
First i take you down, then move in for the kill//
your a typical newbie, can't put up a fight//
you need a 'Lonely Planet', just to navigate this site//
I'm not possible to pass, like the last level in Doom//
You've fired your weapon, all it said was 'BOOM'//
You‘ve just ‘taken off’, and you can’t get a ‘crew’//(
my only loss, and your only wins, were all from DQ//
if rapping was 'paperwork', then ive given you a 'working'//
you couldn't 'handle' Goosen, so i 'handed' you a merking//

ight dawg i did that quick, spit when u can

At rap battlin you'll learn im the man//
When ive finished with you, you'll become MY FAN.

Fantaticly obsessed with my rhyme tatics//
You'll retreat into a shallow grave in your atic. (Shallow Grave=English movie)

Ive heard you spitting shit about me, thats slander//
You raps sound like nursery rhymes, GOOSEY GOOSEY GANDER!!!

Your into cartoons your aviator look like manga//
But you diddle when you speak just like Ned Flanders. (simpsons)

Im like parallel lines, go on for ever you cant stop me//
But like an optical illusion, if you stare at me you go wobbly.

Ive heard your week at knees anyway GOOSEN//
Especially up against me when your LOOSIN.

Im up here battlin inbetween working//
Taking time out my schedule merking you with no rehersal.

My style is diverse yo, universal and perverse yo!!!//
Im a do my work, eat my lunch and still have time to SLAP DIS HO!!!!

Not my best but its ok!!!!
GOOD LUCK!!!

no it wasn't ok, Vote goes to Goosen.
That was like a joke. I don't understand what in there you cherish the most cause there all shit to me.

Vote goes to Goosen

Goosen (not XL4Real) can you hit my battle up with an honest vote, Thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62492

wasss up wit dat goosen ive seen your spit b4, whats the matter you couldnt be bothered to write a new one????
Scared or something???????

Honest I saw those same lyrics on another battle today!!!!

sorry dawg i explained that to u in a pm. i posted the spit but the guy was a no show. i took it back and changed it then posted it again. i havent used it before.

ok I get ya, its in the rules so thats cool!!!! spun me out a sec though!!!!

uppin guys!!!!! this has to be a close one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uppin
uppin
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vote:goosen
punches punches punches, also a nice flow

XL4REAL: please take this advice, im not trying to be a smartass just listen!
u need more punches, try make sure in nearly every line ur dissing ur opponent. it will win u battles. also it will stop u going off course. battle some ppl a little less experienced... jus get ur confidence up a bit. you got good skills just maybe TRY my advice if it dont work call me an idiot.

i aint trying to be a know it all but trust me it will help and i would have liked someone to tell me about 10 battles ago

vote = Goosen

he had harder punches and much better wordplay. his punches were more creative and his structure overall was better. his drop was more enjoyable too.

real you griefed his avatar saying it was a cartoon character yet your avatar is spiderman....?..ok

*poll-voted*

as i hate to admit it goosen got it but cant vote. once again coz xl didnt have any hard punches. da execs r stil fags though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeah goosen was hot flow puches need i say more
ayo you didnt poll vote on mine
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VOTE - GOOSEN

REASON - He had betta punches, flow, etc thruout tha whole battle...completely dominated x4real...iigh

^^one-sided battle
i'll poll my vote inna min
PEACE