Aight dawg post in and I'll go first.

ok im signing in
no crew votes
no hater votes
no pussy friend votes
constructive critism only!!!!

Go Son

Aight here we go

The battle begins and yes I aim to win, rappin vs a pussy with a loss count of 10//
Like a blender my raps'll slice you and dice you into nothin, Whoa dawg thats only 2 lines and your already huffin and puffin//
Come on man you really thought you stood a chance? just cause I'm a newb dont mean you ready for my rant//
XL4 is probably your bra size hoar, I'm waitin for you to battle but you probably cant evne fit through the door//
You know I might just give you mercy....NOT, What I'm spitting is just to damn hot//
Since your mind is blew I guess I'll leave the rest of these lines for some other newb to diss you//

uppin********************************************* ************************************************** *****

Hyper? more like mellow, your lyrical content is shallow//
I got you over a barrell, stick to singing high pitched like Pharol. (n.e.r.d)

I got you scared with my nucular battle//
See you pissing your pants, shouting broken arrow.

Your a Hyper Shadow of your former self//
Cuz your mouth got hallatosis I can smell it when you beltch.

Green gills, yellow stains// Its a wonder you maintain, your rep in this rap game.

If theres one thing for sure if you had one its gone// Cuz you nothing but pawn up against a DON.

Your the whore in this, you got me all me all wrong//
Cuz i'll be pimping your ass out like Don Magic Wan.

Im more skill than you, Ill than you, better therefore and etc...//
Where as you cant even form a line when you playing a game of tetrus.

Even if you were Neo youd get lost in the matrix//
Your not even sure if this is real or is your mind playing trix.

Thats cuz your weak like badly built bridges//
Your rhymes dont spit more like syliva spillage.

Your burning yourself out to early with this shit//
Your brain leaks out your ear drums, that should only take a minite.

Ok that will do, good luck man!!!

wow nice battle dawg good job this is close********************************************* ************************

On this I hae ti go with XL

Hypershadow that was good for a newb.
XL had better punches and I got his flow more.


Vote=XL4REAL

*Poll Vote*

Return the favor honestly I only need one more vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62069

uppin for votes ************************************************** ************************************************** *

Hyper? more like mellow, your lyrical content is shallow//
I got you over a barrell, stick to singing high pitched like Pharol. (n.e.r.d)

^^^^^^

to me that first line was real nice, the rest of it was tight too. The wordplay and punches were better than Hyper

Hyper is still new granted but his was ok.....just keep working with the flow and you'll get it.........

vote - XL4real

Aight Aight I gotta work on my raps but maybe some people will like my rap better uppin for votes***********************************

uppin............................................. .................................................. ..................................

yeah hyper's drop was nice could have been a bit longer though, both had ok flow and wordplay i didn't understand some of XL4reals shit but his punches were harder.

vote = XL4real

vote on my battle:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62457

Well I'm a have to go with XL4Real, He was better overall and had this one line that I would that just showed pure creativity.

"You couldn't make a line even if you were playing tertirs"

Well XL4Real should work on spelling though but it was good none the least.

Ayo whoever sees this vote on this if you didn't already

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62492

cheers, uppin for one more to make the hit// so come on you rappers give me this shit!!!!

uppin
uppin
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow....this cat read my mind
you both came hard, tight battle
props to both
Peace