holla at what u think it was like all off the dome jus flowing



straped wid gats,fully loaded metearial
packed wid snacks,zip lock bags raped wid cerial
spitted fast,relax in hale my lyrical
raps arnt wack,some kids rap deleareyal
no point in knowing just of the dome flowing
raps dont need a reson,quickly decivin
killers attack miss beliven,left bleedin
miss leadin,indentaties un known
attack full blown,rocks thrown
connnect ta heads n shatter domes
gats,packed,wid bullest left straped
no need for rock throwin wid caps,blast
no time to react,fast
violent words,hit hard like boxers
conseal blows,ta the dome
like hoes,left alone
forced ta be prostatuites
no need ta argue,so fuck dispute
come back ta the compute
read my verse n let it sink threw
my flows ill,im known ta kill
attack kids,with back flips
enough twist,when fallin shatterd rips
like babys droped ull think i tossed cribs
this verse was all off the brain,insane
aint it

not bad.. it had a good flow and all... content was kinda shitty, vocab was pretty good..

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thanks well its ma first open mic and shit but thanks for the feeback YO HOLLA WID SOME MORE FEEBACK ALSO I WANNA NO WHATU ALL THINK