this is something i did on h2 camarac asked us to make up our own super hero and do a 10 line verse

i did this purely for a laugh o.k so dont go gettin
all technical...

Supa Beef
With the strength of ten cow's, i fight for freedom.
Protect the kingdom, from Dr.Edam and his evil cheesemen.
Squirtin milk in the face of evil, shootin semi skimmed like a desert eagle.
And this hero doesn't act regal, or always stay legal, cos i t-bone the feeble.
Hoove's of steel, Slap tyrant's with udders repetitivly like a rotating cog-wheel.
Fuck veal, my cattle heard will rattle nerves,
next time think before you steal.
dah dah.....it's supa beef flying at full speed, catching greasy theives.
Running up in your shit like oilseed, and foiling yur plans before they take heed.
Believe in this miracle figure cos i'm sending shockwaves to destroy Evil's ways
and once again the day is saved, and i can return to my underground beef cave....

that was pretty tight add

lol...thank you Addlibb we need more shit like this

^Thanx

aiyo this was pretty tight, im likin the rhyme scheme and everything
9/10

peep my piece featuring Rythmic Tendicies called 110% remix

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i liked it.......i didn't understand some words but it was tight doe!
be easy...............One!