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Old 07-03-03, 04:43 PM   #1
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juz some bull for yah ta read.quick freestyle

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Brains growin rapidily, fuked up mentally/
who gives a damn wut u fuks say about me/
I'm torturing the mic physically/
this skills gotta be dope/
everytime u read me i leave u stoked/
my words are jokes thats why im not taken it to seriously/
sometimes in rhymes i get so furious u wud think i was delirious/
i drop the blunt one day an picked up a mic found mym delight/
spitten shit from real life, in front of every1 in broad day light/
my tongue must be rapped wit C-4, im droppin bombs galore/
hold up..wait a minute...my heads spinnen...put that beat back to the beginning.../
people say becuz im white i cant spit anything its all classed as sinning/
well i got news for you, im'a do what i do, i love rap, its cantagious like the flu/
my dictionary in my brain is really plain/
you people may even class it as laim/
pain...is juz a part of the game/
i'll screw the mic longer then pamelee anderson on a porno rage/
fat girls around..hurry up boys put ur penis in a cage/
im only 15..but when i hit the scene all i hear is ladies scream/
im just going with whatever comes to my head, i remember the time i got head/
this is what the chicky said "ive never done this before i kinda feel like a whore but damn ur penis in my mouth i juz wonna score"/
she told me she was kinda nervous, never done this before, i juz heres some x-t-c, help u calm them nerves an dick ride me/
im sorry ladies that was rude, but i need an ill drop in this rap battle lyrics plot/
my minds a pot, hungeriously cookin for extrodinairy spit/
something everybody wonna vibe wit/
here i am again spittin a vile freestyle thats goin all over the place i cant stay on track/
i just had a lyricle attack/
sorry about that...

juz bored hope yah have fun reasdin this bullshit lol
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Old 07-03-03, 04:46 PM   #2
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YES,THATS THE ILL SHIT

Brains growin rapidily, fuked up mentally/
who gives a damn wut u fuks say about me/

this skills gotta be dope/
everytime u read me i leave u stoked/
SEE THAT IS DIVERSITY FIRST YOU SOUNDED MASS PIST AND SINMPLE THEN HIT A HARD PUNCH I HAVNT BEEN ABLE TO DO THAT YET BUT IM WORKING ON IT YO THIS IS WHAT I LIKES NO DOUBT PAR
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Old 07-03-03, 05:42 PM   #3
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Whoa...{Eyes Wide with Amazment, Gangsta Drops his glock and stares}
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Old 07-03-03, 05:43 PM   #4
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Weak . . .


Flow Was Simple . . .
Even Your Bar Structure . . .
Up Your Vocab,

Come With More Complexity Other Then Simplicity ..

Nothing Stood out as Dope .

Give it A 2.
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Old 07-03-03, 05:47 PM   #5
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not the best dawg...
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