5 barz
be done by today
no dik
no krew
no hate
no feedin
I spit first
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chekin in...will key this up soon
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desil factor


so...yo yo yo....

why am i here? oh right im supposed to be battlin witta desil//
whatta joke, u kno u choke, couldnt be a rap artist if i equipped ya witta easil//

toungue caught up.."oh shit space aint a 7 post newb-he for real"//
yeh dawg that right an like a pig u's bout ta squeal,battle bout to be sealed//

yo yo.....

avi..tip numba one show-no muscle in a text battle bitch ur musclin words//
but if its tru-to-u then ur verbs need sum herbs, feedin of me den runnin like herds//

nada but a flock a antelope-target so wide 500ft distance an aint even need a scope//
couldnt elope witta street hoe od'd on dope, sit bak an mope, ur game spitin tight at night like a pope//

in a 4 year olds ass..onlyway u nut an make a cut for a tru crew//
but u claim all ur votes gainst u be hatin...u suk..dun try an counter-sue//

bitc u ought kno u betta-offa-no show//
seen clogged faucets flo moe then u hoe, close to door, battle over nada butta 2 cent whore//

Listen Ya softa than Pancakes/If we were face to face/ya heart I would take/be serious with that elementary flow/ you the one fuckin elementary ho's/thats 4 years old/Given popsicles just to get in they clothes/using all those yos/listen you fake New York dork/treat you like no fat pork/ya heartless/regardless/of how many times you went to court/I aint the best MC/but if you test cayce/I'll leave ya rhymes right where they need to be/in the garbage/right next to the condomI used on ya bitch/ oh my fault that was ya mom with that pelvic itch/ crabs runnin around her like ocean/straight deep throatin/stuck in and had ya little sister chokin/

UPPIN

i c why ur 0-6 now....gain sum structure son....
what u lak....
personals
metti's
flo
vocab....

you want personal run up/you like a nigga wit no arms/tryin to throw his guns up/bout to get his life fucked/ you thought you was safe/actin all tough/tell me howninetaste/in ya face/callin ya bluff/I aint got to know you/ I know I'll do you/shit you lack/heart,balls,intergritude/yous a cakey dude/

lolthat was exactly what I thought of after I got finish reading his verse.lol.Desil you need to elevate badly.And dropping that second verse is something a newb will do.Come on man.

hit up this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7336#post597336

also hit up the battle that is in my signature.

ok uppin.........
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space had this but none of you'all were banging but YOur new so you will be!!!!!!!

I vote space!!!!!!!!

peace!!!!!!!

ok uppin.........
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fifth an final uppin...suks not havin 100 posts...

yo space took this one
his verse was better and the punches came harder
yo desil, step up ya game dawg
vote=space

check my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

yo this was one sided
df you need structure very badly
try seperating the lines
or ready the rapbattles teaching
man
vote:space
obvious reasons

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