[INTRO]
this is a verbal introduction, its one and only function/
is to make my following works more appealing for consumption/
as we enter verse one put on your seat belts and prepare/
cos theres a threat that the material of reality may tear....
[VERSE 1]
my flow i use as my armour it becomes a invulnerable exterior/
as i up my game from average to something more superior/
with better lines, rhymes, verbal designs in my repertoire/
i bring resources and bling like a multi billion pound investor/ and bring forth death and instigate life like a mad professor/
im on top of my science and on top of my discipline/
and to some my rhymes hurt there eyes like chlorine/
writing rhymes and verses was an escape whilst a teen/
now i've grown to become a dope drop machine/
streamlined bare ill and lean, i bring fire and burn off steam/

drop and finish later bit busy !!

Why Not Just Wait Till You Have It Done, No-one Wants To Read A 1/2 Finshed Piece, And By The Looks Of Things, Not Many People Wanna Read The Finshed Piece Either!

thats coming from someone who's lost more battles than won!!!
i dropped to see reactions if it wasnt anygood nothing lost
not that i need to explain to u

werd^

and dis is coming frum somebody who has more 5 more wins than losses

it was pretty good for a newb. i would give this a 7/10. so i say keep elevatin and concentratin my brotha.
peace

the flow wasn't that great...
the piece was aight and shit, but im not feelin it.
you have to try to work on flow and work on better word-play and shit.
peep my piece feat. rythmic tendicies called 110% raw remix

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I ain't A Good Battler, But, How Can You Judge Someones Open Mics By There battle Record?