the fireworks enlighten the darkened skies of hope
clouds are engulfed with flames that die for poems
try to roam the sociological boundries consensus
and get shocked by the goverments electric fences
remnats left direction, for our nation's plunder sounds
can't see up or down high hopes are buried underground
i wonder how the indians who sell the bombs motion
selling to the cause of independence when it's all stolen
the unicorn of happiness is roped in, i looked i saw
reverse his actions with his heart, realize it's raw
please don't try to fall, if you don't have money's crutch
it's difficult to stand up for much, our land is of such
love to see it fall into the wrong hands is a tragedy
to see him murder the king, from purple mountains majesty
i pass the tree, and slash the bush it was standing on
america the beautiful just took her makeup off....

and she's ugly as fuck....

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well... somebody seems terrorist
actually this was a hot piece. I'm feelin it. the topic-basically just putting America and all its bad values out. this was a weird concept and it worked. I love America and all but there alot of truth to this, playin around or not. this was a very hott piece.
9.5/10
not the best i've seen from you but still a surprising topic and shit, and pulled off better than other would.

can you peep my piece 110% raw feat. rythmic tendicies

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

dope. (will read your piece and give a real response later since you hounding me on IM right now )

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Fwuk all of this.
Fwuk saying Fwuk.
and just scream...
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lol, Bit Of A Controversial Piece...I Can't Really Comment On the Message Cos I Ain't American, But The Joint Itself Was Dope!

You Had Killer Flow, And Brutal Wordplay...Although I've Seen You Do Better Than This, Specially Your Shit On Rb's Legends "Open Mic"!

Overall 8/10, Still Hott Though!

nice replies....

those are decent...

i'll get at your
guys pieces
eventually
thanks.


pz

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Man if your from New Mexico why are you dissin America? Izz all good if you hate us but dont be part of us if you dont like us.....

Anyways can someone hit this up? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63323

Well I'm Sorry Patriot.
I See Things Different
Than You. And Yes I
Live In New Mexico An
No That Does Not Mean
I Have To Like The Way
That America Is Being
Led....Word

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nice piece sand.....
liked the topic flow and delivery
i share the same views....america is getting more and more fucked up
doesnt mean i dont like the country but the government etc is fucked beyond recognition..sadly they are the most powerful too....

this was cool. I liked that part where you said "sociological." it was fun. I had a good time reading this.

Cool delivery, cool concept (even though I strongly disagree), cool everything. . Good to get off of those suicidal topics, bucko.

P.S. fgee is gay

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you kids didn't get the best part though.
no one mentioned it....


Raw.....Reversed....waR

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^word ali. Suicide is bad *slits wrist*

dope piece sand, the imagery was off tha hook.
Your wordplay, metaphors and flow are dope as always, you cock.
Come to canada, we're kickass and weed is deciminalized.
this pointed out the negative things very well, but it kinda exaggerated a bit.
It really isn't that bad, is it?
Peace

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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

"reverse his actions with heart" <-----> war. .

yah, dope. . missed it, too.

and to answer understatement, no, it isn't that bad. . not even close to it.

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