iight u kno the rules .. drop that shit when ur ready

yo lil young p I wanna let u know, no feedin off my shit aight
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iight YooO thats cool drop as quickly as u can .................................................. .................................................. ...........................

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lil young p, yeah I know the p stand 4 pussy
even if Lewis was ya father, u couldn't left hook-me(no punches)
u like a bootleg cd, u have no authenticity
my lyrics is like electricity, cause it'll strike u like lightning to a tree
u might spit but I vommit, vommit shits thats atomic
ur skill level would never be "high" even if u were on "chronic"
this shit is not even fair, I got a machete and u gotta butter knife
u'll never be nice, even if god gave u another life
nigga my punches r so hard it'll knock ur whole face off
u so dumb u put cum in ur turkey thinkin it was chicken broth
even if u used telekenesis, u couldn't come next-to-me
I'm the best-u-see, I'm hotter than how ur pepper-be, the only way u'll come hard, is if u do it to males sexually
my ak will blast at ya, than I'll laugh at ya, not R. Kelly but I'm a trackmaster(R. Kelly's producers)
ur rappin attempt is a disaster, u softer than plaster, u like Will Smith, nothin but an actor
u lyrically cannot combat me, hot lines r what u lack p(lil young p)
my rhymes is phatter than ppl that only eat big macs be
u might as well not post ur verse cause this battle is already won
u wouldn't be hot, even if u were rappin with an imflammatory gun
trust me son, I know this battle is not what u envisioned
u young and lil, thats y to cross the street, u need parental supervision
this battle has u lyrically walkin a very thin-line
I'll throw lyrical darts at u, and have u look a porkupine
I already started makin plans 4 ur burial
nigga u basically dead there no help, not even medicinal
when u done readin this, I'll make u leave this site
u would never shine even if u had the beacon of light

Freestyle? ... You need to learn what that means.
Ima familiar face, the one you see in ya dreams.
You pose, but I stay reppin my street.
Dont battle me, unless you wanna face "da-feet".
Agony always tryna "sell" that he ill... I wont "buy it".
Cuz your punches lack too much, like Opra Winfreys diet.
Ima put you on my lyrical grill, and watch as you roast.
Dont boast, my punches sit you down like I was the host.
Im the only emcee up in here bold enough to claim I'm white.
Me expect to lose? When even you agree that you can't fight.
I stay coming at u infinite times like my punches were purgery.
My rhymes give you a new face, as if they were plastic surgeory.
So I guess, in this battle, you could call me the lyrical surgeon.
Fuck around with your rhymes, I'm suprised your still a virgin.
So if you call yourself the "agony", I must be the "pain".
My verse pushing you around like it was a ten ton train.
Call me Kujo, a raging pitbull that just can't be tamed.
Enough said... you've already been put to shame.
Why take me to trialfor murder.......
...........................When I'll gladly just accept the blame.


*Edited to take out ~ - - - ~

Not bitten, it was a long time ago.

Young P, The Claimin u white shit...........very gay,

Ur verse was okay, sum decent flow in sum areas and ur structure was pretty good

Agonys urs lacked decent structure, whereas ur skillz where okay

Im Givin it to LIL Young on the count of better structure and flow

Peace

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Agony took this cause of his wordplay and metas...

Much better.

Lil P came good, but simple...

Straight ahead punches that would have hurt more if they'd been played with some.

Good effort, just not good enough.

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wow... there were 9 votes & i erased the ones that were either one line or from banned kids & im left w/ 2 votes... . . . . . just wow. next one line voter is dq'd from a battle of theirs.

Yo. Vote and drop a link. I know Elevated is slept on. But drop on mine real quick with an honest one.......................

opener: tie
closer: P
punches: agony
structure: tie
vocab: agony
wordplay: agony
overall: agony

young P you came way to simple in most aspects.
peace



plz drop an honest vote on this battle, it also is being mad slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99197

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Opening: Neither~
Punches: agony
Personals: tie
Structure: agony
Vocab: tie
Flow: Young P
Closer: Young P
Overall: agony


P This is a different structure for you? Possibly bitten cough but ya close battle but agony takes this~

Ya know I didnt even check tha date on this ~ oh well nj changin ur struc over time 1 .

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