Had a lot of stuff on my mind since my last post which was about a year ago, but am back. Felt the need to get some shit off my chest n hit the keys and pulled this out me ass in 30mins:

Your whole style is fucked up making other people suffer//
The one bitch on the planet making my life tougher//
you're a chump and a pussy, thats one big fucking faggot//
you saw the oppotunity and your bitch ass grabbed it//
Started this shit years ago and your still dragging it on//
Just gimme a fucking reason and I'll make your ass gone//
All these threats you make about hurting you not me//
Just proves your a pussy, to everyone who forgot, see?//

Seems you only got born to spoil my fucking youth//
and I'm the only person that knows the honest truth//
I can't prove I'm innocent but I see no silver chains//
so I'm gona keep fightin' you till only one of us remains//
Wish you could feel my pain so you would know what it's like//
To wish someone elses mother was always a fucking dyke//
You freak out when I look at you, whats the problem there?//
If it causes you pain man then I'll fucking stare//

I read your whole police statement its so full of shit//
Did you even fucking try to make it appear a little legit//
This ain't gona make court man, I know my hands are clean//
It's one mad fucking expirence when your still a fucking teen//
When you're backed in a corner and theres only one way out//
So take it now man, cuz you I could easily live without//
Why you always on my case, are you that fucking obsessed?//
Walking round smiling, I thought you was clinically depressed//

My life's being controlled but I aint the fucking master//
which is why there aint anybody who's lived happily ever after//
It's all buildin up and soon I'm gona release this agression//
I don't think I can wait 2 more years for your confession//
I don't fucking know if your too smart or too clever//
But whatever the fuck it is you need to get your shit together//
So undo all the harm and all the fucking lies you've said//
Then turn your own ass in and quit while your ahead//

Critque it or whatever doubt it'll get a positive response but I needed to get if off my chest. I wrote somethin else awhile ago which is a lot more agressive than this my post it if I feel the need to release some steam.

yea that was good, i liked it but i want to battle you, an all english battle

uppin for constructive critisism.

uppin again i guess